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<span style="mso-ansi-language: EN-US">Copenhagen (on 8 / 25 -09) 25 Aug. 2009</o:p>

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Email: [email protected]</o:p>

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A little intro what I wanted to enter in my application.</o:p>

First I would tell about myself then I would tell you what I've done before. then I would talk about what I do in my free time I also think it is good to know what you are doing here. Drop alt det !!!!!!</o:p>

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I have read their ???? advertisements in today's (edition of) Urban, (which I) and found them very appealing.(8,) (and i)It would be an (honor) honour for me to be considered a suitable candidate (if  you would consider me a conversation that leads towards) for a position in banking.</o:p>

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In short my name is Thomas (efternavn???), (and) 18 years old and currently studying at Niels Brock, HHX, As I would finish this school year so in 2010. When I just started again this year on education, I have not received my grades yet. This means that I can not attach this nature. But it can be shown that my remarkable skills in English should not fail anything. The economic profession so called marketing and business economics, I also have the right qualifications to be sought.</o:p>

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I am looking for a job where I can work around. 2-3 times per week. I have experience in serving customers from my previous job was as an Italian delicatessen in Frederiksberg (Quattro Fontane).</o:p>

In addition, I arrange the students in my school so I have experience with them to order drinks, coordinate people and clean up. I also work at a cafe with a name cafe capers which attaches Østerbro. There I worked, among other things in the bar and box, but it also serves.</o:p>

I also work at home as a mælger chain here, I shared the paper out to people who would perhaps like to buy or sell your apartments and houses. Here I got a good discipline and good customer knowledge and it seems to me. It's something I can use for other work and it is a good knowledge I have received.</o:p>

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This job I have worked with for nearly a half years and has been very good. Because of my stunning performance in the industry, I have been offered a promotion to be responsible for all the cafe, but I went not to because it required that I should be working full time and I can not do when I go to school while that was why I thanked no to the offer. Now I need a change, so therefore I seek with you. This job has taught me to avoid stress and anxiety when working under time pressure, as you would normally do in these circumstances. I am very flexible, service-minded, responsible, and also I am good to keep a cool head in stressful situations.</o:p>

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The reason I just looking for a job with you is that I have read your ad and think that it is incredibly nice and very charming. I really felt that there was a good atmosphere and it sounds as though that service is first class. To a place I could really like to work, so therefore I will be happy to attend for an interview where we can find out if I might. is the right to hold this position with you.</o:p>

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In my spare time I like to train and take exercise in the local gym, while doing some freelance programming, which has given me a lot of contacts.</o:p>

If the above should have caught your interest or if there were any</o:p>

further questions, are more than welcome to contact me.</o:p>

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I look forward to hearing from you.</o:p>

Sincerely,

Thomas Lennox

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Jeg er ked af at måtte sige det, men man ser snart at dit engelsk er så dårligt at man ikke kan rette det. Jeg  har prøvet, men     ........det må skrives helt om</o:p>