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rettelser til lidt eng
25. december 2004 af
nadal (Slettet)
hej alle håber i har haft en gof jul.. er meget dårlig til eng så håber i kan hjælpe.. Her er hvad jeg har skrevet:
Eurokids
The United States of America have allways been described as “the nation of dreams”.
But if you ask young danish, they might have an other vision about ”the coolest and most powerful nation in the world”
This article is written in extension of a survey, based on a questionnaire.
USA have allways had a big influence on European culture, eventhough they haven’t any culture themselves.
But now young danish have began to take distance from USA. If you ask young danish about they prefere to eat fastfood as burgers, pizza etc or home-made food from their mothers pot.
Eurokids
The United States of America have allways been described as “the nation of dreams”.
But if you ask young danish, they might have an other vision about ”the coolest and most powerful nation in the world”
This article is written in extension of a survey, based on a questionnaire.
USA have allways had a big influence on European culture, eventhough they haven’t any culture themselves.
But now young danish have began to take distance from USA. If you ask young danish about they prefere to eat fastfood as burgers, pizza etc or home-made food from their mothers pot.
Svar #1
26. december 2004 af Epsilon (Slettet)
Det er en fordel, at man som indlægger gør rede for, hvad essayet/kommentaren m.m. drejer sig om. Kort sagt: hvad er dit tekstgrundlag, og hvilken opgave skal du skrive? Det gør det meget lettere for andre at kommentere/vurdere dit indlæg.
Der er påfaldende mange tomme linier i dit indlæg. Er det manglende tekst, som ikke blev indsat, eller bare en fejl?
Der er enkelte fejl i selve teksten i indlægget. Prøv selv at foretage rettelser af følgende ord;
- allways
- eventhough
- have began
- prefere
Vink: et af ordene skal blot deles.
Sprogligt set er det da godt, men sidste del af tekstens indhold er usammenhængende:
"If you ask young danish about they prefere to eat fastfood as burgers, pizza etc or home-made food from their mothers pot."
Sætningen er ufuldstændig: "Hvis man spørger de unge..." ja, hvad svarer de dertil? Er der blandt de unge delte meninger om, hvorvidt fast-food er bedre end 'mors kødgryder' eller ej? Det kommer du måske ind på bagefter?
//Singularity
Der er påfaldende mange tomme linier i dit indlæg. Er det manglende tekst, som ikke blev indsat, eller bare en fejl?
Der er enkelte fejl i selve teksten i indlægget. Prøv selv at foretage rettelser af følgende ord;
- allways
- eventhough
- have began
- prefere
Vink: et af ordene skal blot deles.
Sprogligt set er det da godt, men sidste del af tekstens indhold er usammenhængende:
"If you ask young danish about they prefere to eat fastfood as burgers, pizza etc or home-made food from their mothers pot."
Sætningen er ufuldstændig: "Hvis man spørger de unge..." ja, hvad svarer de dertil? Er der blandt de unge delte meninger om, hvorvidt fast-food er bedre end 'mors kødgryder' eller ej? Det kommer du måske ind på bagefter?
//Singularity
Svar #2
26. december 2004 af Epsilon (Slettet)
Det er en fordel, at man som indlægger gør rede for, hvad essayet/kommentaren m.m. drejer sig om. Kort sagt: hvad er dit tekstgrundlag, og hvilken opgave skal du skrive? Det gør det meget lettere for andre at kommentere/vurdere dit indlæg.
Der er påfaldende mange tomme linier i dit indlæg. Er det manglende tekst, som ikke blev indsat, eller bare en fejl?
Der er enkelte fejl i selve teksten i indlægget. Prøv selv at foretage rettelser af følgende ord;
- allways
- eventhough
- have began
- prefere
Vink: et af ordene skal blot deles.
Sprogligt set er det da godt, men sidste del af tekstens indhold er usammenhængende:
"If you ask young danish about they prefere to eat fastfood as burgers, pizza etc or home-made food from their mothers pot."
Sætningen er ufuldstændig: "Hvis man spørger de unge..." ja, hvad svarer de dertil? Er der blandt de unge delte meninger om, hvorvidt fast-food er bedre end 'mors kødgryder' eller ej? Det kommer du måske ind på bagefter?
//Singularity
Der er påfaldende mange tomme linier i dit indlæg. Er det manglende tekst, som ikke blev indsat, eller bare en fejl?
Der er enkelte fejl i selve teksten i indlægget. Prøv selv at foretage rettelser af følgende ord;
- allways
- eventhough
- have began
- prefere
Vink: et af ordene skal blot deles.
Sprogligt set er det da godt, men sidste del af tekstens indhold er usammenhængende:
"If you ask young danish about they prefere to eat fastfood as burgers, pizza etc or home-made food from their mothers pot."
Sætningen er ufuldstændig: "Hvis man spørger de unge..." ja, hvad svarer de dertil? Er der blandt de unge delte meninger om, hvorvidt fast-food er bedre end 'mors kødgryder' eller ej? Det kommer du måske ind på bagefter?
//Singularity
Svar #3
26. december 2004 af nadal (Slettet)
Undskyld , grunden til det ender så brat er at jeg har delt en artikel med 2 andre, vi skal sammen skrive om danske børns mening om usa. Ser det her bedre ud.
Eurokids
The United States of America have always been described as “the nation of dreams”.
But if you ask young danish, they might have an other vision about ”the coolest and most powerful nation in the world”
This article is written in extension of a survey, based on a questionnaire.
USA have always had a big influence on European culture, even though they haven’t any culture themselves.
But now young danish have begin to take distance from USA. If you ask young danish about they preferre to eat fastfood as burgers, pizza etc or home-made food from their mothers pot.
Eurokids
The United States of America have always been described as “the nation of dreams”.
But if you ask young danish, they might have an other vision about ”the coolest and most powerful nation in the world”
This article is written in extension of a survey, based on a questionnaire.
USA have always had a big influence on European culture, even though they haven’t any culture themselves.
But now young danish have begin to take distance from USA. If you ask young danish about they preferre to eat fastfood as burgers, pizza etc or home-made food from their mothers pot.
Svar #4
26. december 2004 af Epsilon (Slettet)
#3: Ja, det er bedre, men du har ikke rettet disse ord korrekt;
have begin
preferre
'begin' er et uregelmæssigt verbum. Slå bøjningen op i ordbogen.
Den sidste sætning er stadigvæk ufuldstændig. "If you ask young...." ja, hvad svarer de dertil?
//Singularity
have begin
preferre
'begin' er et uregelmæssigt verbum. Slå bøjningen op i ordbogen.
Den sidste sætning er stadigvæk ufuldstændig. "If you ask young...." ja, hvad svarer de dertil?
//Singularity
Svar #5
26. december 2004 af Alicante (Slettet)
jeg ville bruge:
but if you ask young DANES
USA HAS......
even though they hasn't.....
but now young DANES have began/begun
about WHAT they prefer to eat. Fastfood LIKE burgers....
from their mothers pots
but if you ask young DANES
USA HAS......
even though they hasn't.....
but now young DANES have began/begun
about WHAT they prefer to eat. Fastfood LIKE burgers....
from their mothers pots
Svar #6
26. december 2004 af nadal (Slettet)
Mange tak for hjælpen, jeg har lavet nogle rettelser og tilføjet lidt. det ville være lækkert hvis i kom med nogle forslag til ændringer:
Eurokids
The United States of America have allways been described as “the nation of dreams”.
But if you ask young danish, they might have an other vision about ”the coolest and most
powerful nation in the world”
This article is written in extension of a survey, based on a questionnaire.
USA has allways had a big influence on European culture, even though they hasn't any culture themselves.
but now young danes have begun to take distance from USA. But if you ask young danes about what they prefere to eat. fastfood like burgers, pizza etc or home-made food from their mothers pots. You would get surprised, because the young danes of today prefere delicious home-made food. Unlike the young danes from the past, which “loved” fastfood.. Many things have changed from the past to now. In the eighties, almost every body dreamed about settled down in USA. Bot now they wont haven’t the same realationship as the young people in the eighties, because they now how the real USA is. Not like on movies, where everyting is peaceful. There is two things that could make them move, is the lower taxes etc. And that they haven’t got the “Jantelov”.
Eurokids
The United States of America have allways been described as “the nation of dreams”.
But if you ask young danish, they might have an other vision about ”the coolest and most
powerful nation in the world”
This article is written in extension of a survey, based on a questionnaire.
USA has allways had a big influence on European culture, even though they hasn't any culture themselves.
but now young danes have begun to take distance from USA. But if you ask young danes about what they prefere to eat. fastfood like burgers, pizza etc or home-made food from their mothers pots. You would get surprised, because the young danes of today prefere delicious home-made food. Unlike the young danes from the past, which “loved” fastfood.. Many things have changed from the past to now. In the eighties, almost every body dreamed about settled down in USA. Bot now they wont haven’t the same realationship as the young people in the eighties, because they now how the real USA is. Not like on movies, where everyting is peaceful. There is two things that could make them move, is the lower taxes etc. And that they haven’t got the “Jantelov”.
Svar #7
27. december 2004 af Epsilon (Slettet)
#5,6: Der skal altid bestemt artikel ('the') foran USA på engelsk, uanset om staterne betragtes som en fælles enhed;
"The USA is a very powerful nation"
eller individuelt;
"The USA have different views on the two candidates for the presidential election."
Bemærk, at 'the USA' kan opfattes som ental eller flertal, afhængigt af den enkelte sætning.
Flertal: hvis USA betragtes som en flerhed af stater.
Ental: hvis USA betragtes som en enhed.
Derfor, eksempelvis (rettelser med stort);
"The United States of America HAS allways been described as "the nation of dreams"."
og
"THE USA has ALWAYS had a big influence on European culture, even though IT hasn't any culture ITSELF [alternativt: 'even though they HAVEN'T [...] themselves', hvis man mener de enkelte staters kulturer].
Det er under alle omstændigheder forkert at skrive 'they hasn't'.
//Singularity
"The USA is a very powerful nation"
eller individuelt;
"The USA have different views on the two candidates for the presidential election."
Bemærk, at 'the USA' kan opfattes som ental eller flertal, afhængigt af den enkelte sætning.
Flertal: hvis USA betragtes som en flerhed af stater.
Ental: hvis USA betragtes som en enhed.
Derfor, eksempelvis (rettelser med stort);
"The United States of America HAS allways been described as "the nation of dreams"."
og
"THE USA has ALWAYS had a big influence on European culture, even though IT hasn't any culture ITSELF [alternativt: 'even though they HAVEN'T [...] themselves', hvis man mener de enkelte staters kulturer].
Det er under alle omstændigheder forkert at skrive 'they hasn't'.
//Singularity
Svar #8
27. december 2004 af Epsilon (Slettet)
#6: Her er nogle fejl, du bør rette;
1) 'prefere' (slå det nu lige op i ordbogen).
2) 'danes' skrives med stort: 'Danes', da det er en nationalitetsangivelse (jf. Englishman/Englishmen).
3) 'allways' (slå op i ordbogen).
4) I sætningen:
"because they now how the real USA is"
er 'now' helt forkert. Slå det danske verbum 'vide' op i ordbogen.
//Singularity
1) 'prefere' (slå det nu lige op i ordbogen).
2) 'danes' skrives med stort: 'Danes', da det er en nationalitetsangivelse (jf. Englishman/Englishmen).
3) 'allways' (slå op i ordbogen).
4) I sætningen:
"because they now how the real USA is"
er 'now' helt forkert. Slå det danske verbum 'vide' op i ordbogen.
//Singularity
Svar #9
27. december 2004 af Alicante (Slettet)
Eurokids
The United States of America have always been described as “the nation of dreams”.
But if you ask young Danes, they might have an other vision about ”the coolest and most
powerful nation in the world”
This article is written in extension of a survey, based on a questionnaire.
The USA has always had a big influence on European culture, even though it hasn't any culture themselves.
but now young Danes have begun to take a distance from the USA. But if you ask young Danes what they prefer to eat. (mangler noget) fast-food like burgers, pizza etc, or home-made food from their mothers pots. You would get surprised, because the young Danes today prefer delicious home-made food. Unlike the young Danes (from the past) fra fortiden??, which “loved” fast-food.. Many things have changed from the past till now. In the eighties, almost every body dreamed about settling down in USA. Bot now they wont have the same relationship as the young people in the eighties, because they know how the real the USA is. Not like on movies, where everything is peaceful. There is two things that could make them move, is the lower taxes (etc). And that they haven’t got the “Jantelov”.
The United States of America have always been described as “the nation of dreams”.
But if you ask young Danes, they might have an other vision about ”the coolest and most
powerful nation in the world”
This article is written in extension of a survey, based on a questionnaire.
The USA has always had a big influence on European culture, even though it hasn't any culture themselves.
but now young Danes have begun to take a distance from the USA. But if you ask young Danes what they prefer to eat. (mangler noget) fast-food like burgers, pizza etc, or home-made food from their mothers pots. You would get surprised, because the young Danes today prefer delicious home-made food. Unlike the young Danes (from the past) fra fortiden??, which “loved” fast-food.. Many things have changed from the past till now. In the eighties, almost every body dreamed about settling down in USA. Bot now they wont have the same relationship as the young people in the eighties, because they know how the real the USA is. Not like on movies, where everything is peaceful. There is two things that could make them move, is the lower taxes (etc). And that they haven’t got the “Jantelov”.
Svar #11
27. december 2004 af Alicante (Slettet)
Eurokids
The United States of America have allways been described as “the nation of dreams”.
But if you ask young
Danes,
they might have an other vision about ”the coolest and most
powerful nation in the world”
This article is written in extension of a survey, based on a questionnaire.
The
USA has
always
had a big influence on European culture, even though they hasn't any culture themselves.
but now young danes have begun to take distance from USA. But if you ask young danes about what they
prefer
to eat. (mangler noget)
fastfood like burgers, pizza etc or home-made food from their mothers pots. You would get surprised, because the young danes today prefer delicious home-made food. Unlike the young danes (from the past)fra fortiden???
, which “loved” fastfood.. Many things have changed from the past to now. In the eighties, almost every body dreamed about
settling
down in the USA. Bot now they
wont have
the same
relationship
as the young people in the eighties, because they
know
how the USA
really
is. Not like
the movies,
where everyting is peaceful. There is two things that could make them move, it is the lower taxes. And that they haven’t got the “Jantelov”.
jeg har forsøgt at vise rettelserne ved at lade ordet stå alene, håber det er læseligt, ps. jeg kan se du læser fransk også og det er måske din stærke side, dit engelske viser dette bla. med prefere. men hvis du arbejder med det skal du nok blive dygtig, øvelse gør mester.
The United States of America have allways been described as “the nation of dreams”.
But if you ask young
Danes,
they might have an other vision about ”the coolest and most
powerful nation in the world”
This article is written in extension of a survey, based on a questionnaire.
The
USA has
always
had a big influence on European culture, even though they hasn't any culture themselves.
but now young danes have begun to take distance from USA. But if you ask young danes about what they
prefer
to eat. (mangler noget)
fastfood like burgers, pizza etc or home-made food from their mothers pots. You would get surprised, because the young danes today prefer delicious home-made food. Unlike the young danes (from the past)fra fortiden???
, which “loved” fastfood.. Many things have changed from the past to now. In the eighties, almost every body dreamed about
settling
down in the USA. Bot now they
wont have
the same
relationship
as the young people in the eighties, because they
know
how the USA
really
is. Not like
the movies,
where everyting is peaceful. There is two things that could make them move, it is the lower taxes. And that they haven’t got the “Jantelov”.
jeg har forsøgt at vise rettelserne ved at lade ordet stå alene, håber det er læseligt, ps. jeg kan se du læser fransk også og det er måske din stærke side, dit engelske viser dette bla. med prefere. men hvis du arbejder med det skal du nok blive dygtig, øvelse gør mester.
Svar #13
27. december 2004 af nadal (Slettet)
mange tak for hjælpen er som sagt ikke så god, men sætter meget pris på jeres hjælp
Svar #14
27. december 2004 af nadal (Slettet)
Med hjælp fra jer er jeg så kommet frem til den endelige version( hvad kalder man så noget):
Eurokids
The United States of America has allways been described as "the nation of dreams". But if you ask young danish, they might have an other vision about ”the coolest and most
powerful nation in the world”
This article is written in extension of a survey, based on a questionnaire.
The USA has Always had a big influence on European culture, even though it hasn't any culture itself,
but now young Danes have begun to take distance from the USA. If you ask young danes about what they prefer to eat. fastfood like burgers, pizza etc or home-made food from their mothers pots. You would get surprised, because the young Danes of today prefere delicious home-made food. Unlike the young Danes from the past, which “loved” fastfood.. Many things have changed from the past to now. In the eighties, almost every body dreamed about settling down in the USA. But now they wont, because they haven’t the same relationship as the young people in the eighties, because they know how the real USA is. Not like, the movies, where everyting is peaceful. There is only two things that could make them move, it’s the lower taxes etc. And that they haven’t got the “Jantelov”. But the young Danes have in mind that they have to pay for medical treatment if they get hurt, unlike in Denmark where its free.
But not all the things about the USA are bad according to young Danes, the young Danes prefer the American music because It's made with the customer in mind. In Europe all the music are very similar, which is a great adnvantage for the Amercian music market.
Eurokids
The United States of America has allways been described as "the nation of dreams". But if you ask young danish, they might have an other vision about ”the coolest and most
powerful nation in the world”
This article is written in extension of a survey, based on a questionnaire.
The USA has Always had a big influence on European culture, even though it hasn't any culture itself,
but now young Danes have begun to take distance from the USA. If you ask young danes about what they prefer to eat. fastfood like burgers, pizza etc or home-made food from their mothers pots. You would get surprised, because the young Danes of today prefere delicious home-made food. Unlike the young Danes from the past, which “loved” fastfood.. Many things have changed from the past to now. In the eighties, almost every body dreamed about settling down in the USA. But now they wont, because they haven’t the same relationship as the young people in the eighties, because they know how the real USA is. Not like, the movies, where everyting is peaceful. There is only two things that could make them move, it’s the lower taxes etc. And that they haven’t got the “Jantelov”. But the young Danes have in mind that they have to pay for medical treatment if they get hurt, unlike in Denmark where its free.
But not all the things about the USA are bad according to young Danes, the young Danes prefer the American music because It's made with the customer in mind. In Europe all the music are very similar, which is a great adnvantage for the Amercian music market.
Svar #15
27. december 2004 af Alicante (Slettet)
linie:
1: husk et l i always
2: ikke danish men Danes
7: Always med lille always
inden jeg går videre vil jeg lige spørge om du vil skrive teksten på dansk. eller var det en artikel som du skulle oversætte?????
1: husk et l i always
2: ikke danish men Danes
7: Always med lille always
inden jeg går videre vil jeg lige spørge om du vil skrive teksten på dansk. eller var det en artikel som du skulle oversætte?????
Svar #16
27. december 2004 af Dana (Slettet)
Eurokids
The United States of America has ALWAYS(kun et L) been described as "the nation of dreams". But if you ask young Danish(DANISH er med stort) PEOPLE/DANES, they might have ANOTHER(i et ord) vision(mener du ikke VERSION?) about ”the coolest and most
powerful nation in the world”
This article is written in extension TO(forkert præposition) a survey, based on a questionnaire.
The USA has Always had a big influence on European culture, even though it hasn't any culture itself,
but now young Danes have begun to take distance from the USA. If you ask young danes about what they prefer to eat. fastfood like burgers, pizza etc or home-made food from their mothers pots. You would BE surprised, because the young Danes of today prefere delicious home-made food. Unlike the young Danes OF the past, WHO “loved” fastfood.. Many things have changed from the past to now. In the eighties, almost EVERYBODY(i et ord) dreamed about settling down in the USA. But now they WON'T(husk apostrof) , because they haven’t GOT(der mangler noget efter haven't) the same relationship as the young people in the eighties, because they know how the real USA is. Not like, the movies, where everyting is peaceful. There is only two things that could make them move, it’s the lower taxes etc. And that they haven’t got the “Jantelov”. But the young Danes SHOULD(der manglede noget her) have in mind that they have to pay for medical treatment if they get hurt, unlike in Denmark where IT'S(husk apostrof) free.
But not all (udelad THE) things about the USA are bad according to young Danes, the young Danes prefer the American music because It's made with the customer in mind. In Europe all (udelad THE) music are very similar, which is a great advantage for the AMERICAN(stavefejl) music market.
The United States of America has ALWAYS(kun et L) been described as "the nation of dreams". But if you ask young Danish(DANISH er med stort) PEOPLE/DANES, they might have ANOTHER(i et ord) vision(mener du ikke VERSION?) about ”the coolest and most
powerful nation in the world”
This article is written in extension TO(forkert præposition) a survey, based on a questionnaire.
The USA has Always had a big influence on European culture, even though it hasn't any culture itself,
but now young Danes have begun to take distance from the USA. If you ask young danes about what they prefer to eat. fastfood like burgers, pizza etc or home-made food from their mothers pots. You would BE surprised, because the young Danes of today prefere delicious home-made food. Unlike the young Danes OF the past, WHO “loved” fastfood.. Many things have changed from the past to now. In the eighties, almost EVERYBODY(i et ord) dreamed about settling down in the USA. But now they WON'T(husk apostrof) , because they haven’t GOT(der mangler noget efter haven't) the same relationship as the young people in the eighties, because they know how the real USA is. Not like, the movies, where everyting is peaceful. There is only two things that could make them move, it’s the lower taxes etc. And that they haven’t got the “Jantelov”. But the young Danes SHOULD(der manglede noget her) have in mind that they have to pay for medical treatment if they get hurt, unlike in Denmark where IT'S(husk apostrof) free.
But not all (udelad THE) things about the USA are bad according to young Danes, the young Danes prefer the American music because It's made with the customer in mind. In Europe all (udelad THE) music are very similar, which is a great advantage for the AMERICAN(stavefejl) music market.
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