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Rettelse ... ^^
heeey :-)
har brug for lidt rettelse (: jeg er næsten sikker på , at det hele er rigtigt (: men er i tvivl om : Murder og Murderer. Altså en murder hedder murder og når man bliver myrdet? og at jeg skriver i nutid og så i datid gør mig også i tvivl.
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1. I see a lot of leaves and a dead body.
I think that it is a girl who was murdered and the murderer hide her body in the forrest. You can’t see the whole body, only the legs. The rest of the body is surrounded by leaves.
I think that the murder is a serial killer who only kills women. He hates women so his plan is to kill all young women. I think he met her at a nightclub, where he flirted with her. As the evening was over, he followed her home. the girl invited him inside and they sat and talked. At one point he goes to the toilet and does his knife ready. He comes in, closes the mouth of the girl and sticks her with the knife. so he killed all the young girls he has met. after he killed her he took her to the woods. and now she is dead, cold and surrounded by leaves.
If i was a detective i would investigate the girl's house, work, friends, family and find out why she was killed. I would find as many evidences as possible. When I had gathered all the things that I need, than I would find the murder. When I found him so I wouldn’t attack him, but arrest him. People like him deserves jail.
I have seen many crime films and series. I have no favorites, but I like CSI: Miami (Crime Scene Investigation: Miami). It is created by Anthony E. Zuiker Carol Mendelsohn and Ann Donahue. Jerry Bruckheimer is the producer.
Inspired by the top-rated series "CSI: Crime Scene Investigation," CSI: MIAMI is a drama that follows a South Florida team of forensic investigators who use both cutting-edge scientific methods and old-fashioned police work to solve crimes.
It is an American crime drama, where the CSI unveil the circumstances behind mysterious and unusual deaths and other crimes.
I think it is a really exiting serie. I like the way they solve crimies on. I like the whole set-up and when I fallow the detective or police I get so exited.
I also like CSI. It is a crime serie. The serie follows the nights of the detectives working at the Las Vegas Police Department Crime Scene Investigations bureau. Being the second busiest crime lab in America, CSI officers use the best scientific and technical methods to solve puzzles and catch criminals.
CSI have won ASCAP Award in 2006 and have also been nominated many times.
I like the way they (the detectives/police) solve crimies on.
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Købmagergade 21
1220 København K
17. august
Keytools Ltd
PO BOX 700
Southampton
S017 1LQ UK
Thank you for your letter of 20 May with a catalogue and price list of your new products. In particular we find your collection of accessories most interesting.
We would like to negotiate a big contract with you if you are capable of delivering at reasonable prices. Before we can place the order please state if you have the goods in stock.
The goods should be delivered to our Copenhagen address, before Monday 24 September, since they are part of a delivery to a large Danish company.
You will receive our order if your prices meet our expectations.
We look forward to hear from you.
Yours Sincerely
Andreas Jespersen
Holder
Svar #1
15. september 2009 af Stygotius (Slettet)
"murder" = "mord"
"murderer = "morder
A murderer commits murder.
Du svinger hid og did mellem nutid og datid, og det gør læseren helt søsyg. (Jeg har ikke orket at markere alle disse steder)
Din kommasætning er rodet og (vildledende) upræcis.
Du svinger mellem at bruge engelske og amerikanske udtryk
NB. Dit forreningsbrev er helt fint !!
.........alle uheldige steder er markeret med fed skrift og understregning.
.........................................................................................
1. I see a lot of leaves and a dead body.
I think that (it is) a girl who was murdered and the murderer hide her body in the forrest. You can’t see the whole body, only the legs. The rest of the body is surrounded by leaves.
I think that the murder is a serial killer who only kills women. He hates women so his plan is to kill all young women. I think he met her at a nightclub, where he flirted with her. As the evening was over, he followed her home. the girl invited him inside and they sat and talked. At one point he goes to the toilet and does his knife ready. He comes in, closes the mouth of the girl and sticks her with the knife. so he killed all the young girls he has met. after he killed her he took her to the woods. and now she is dead, cold and surrounded by leaves.
If i was a detective i would investigate the girl's house, work, friends, family and find out why she was killed. I would find as many evidences as possible. When I had gathered all the things that I need, than I would find the murder. When I found him so I wouldn’t attack him, but arrest him. People like him deserves jail.
I have seen many crime films and series. I have no favorites, but I like CSI: Miami (Crime Scene Investigation: Miami). It is created by Anthony E. Zuiker Carol Mendelsohn and Ann Donahue. Jerry Bruckheimer is the producer.
Inspired by the top-rated series "CSI: Crime Scene Investigation," CSI: MIAMI is a drama that follows a South Florida team of forensic investigators who use both cutting-edge scientific methods and old-fashioned police work to solve crimes.
It is an American crime drama, where the CSI unveil the circumstances behind mysterious and unusual deaths and other crimes.
I think it is a really exiting serie. I like the way they solve crimies on. I like the whole set-up and when I fallow the detective or police I get so exited.
I also like CSI. It is a crime serie. The serie follows the nights of the detectives working at the Las Vegas Police Department Crime Scene Investigations bureau. Being the second busiest crime lab in America, CSI officers use the best scientific and technical methods to solve puzzles and catch criminals.
CSI have won ___ ASCAP Award in 2006 and have also been nominated many times.
I like the way they (the detectives/police) solve crimies on.
Oversættelse fra Dansk til Engelsk
Web Computers
Købmagergade 21
1220 København K (skrives normalt i øverste højre hjørne UDEN afsenderens navn, -kun adressen)
17. august
Keytools Ltd
PO BOX 700
Southampton
S017 1LQ UK
Thank you for your letter of 20 May with a catalogue and price list of your new products. In particular we find your collection of accessories most interesting.
We would like to negotiate a big contract with you if you are capable of delivering at reasonable prices. Before we can place the order please state if you have the goods in stock.
The goods should be delivered to our Copenhagen address, before Monday 24 September, since they are part of a delivery to a large Danish company.
You will receive our order if your prices meet our expectations.
We look forward to hear from you.
Yours Sincerely NB. KOMMA !!!
Andreas Jespersen
Holder
Svar #2
15. september 2009 af AfricaGirl (Slettet)
er det med fed rettelse?
Okay . jeg retter selv fejlene
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