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Engelsk rettelser!! (2)
Det ville bare være super hvis der var en der lige gad og læse det her igennem, på forhånd tak:)
Juliet had also been to visit a friend. They had made a lot of homework together and now she was on her way home with some heavy books in her arms. it was a long way home for her, she should to another end of Chicago.
Juliet came from a huge family with much money. her dad was a boss in a big company in another town near Chicago and he knew how the things should go on. Juliet lied in a gigantic and beautiful white house with her mon, her dad and her littlesister. She doesn't miss anything in her life.
she walked quickly now. she was i little afraid for the dark streets and all the homeless she saw and she wished she was home in her safely house. Juliet hoped that none of them wood talk to her even look at her.
she ran very fast now and suddenly she ran into a boy. she got very suprises and starts to pick up her books wich she had lost on the street. she look up and saw directly into the boys face. she thought that he looks very friendly and she smiled to him.
Svar #1
23. september 2009 af Lisbeth.o (Slettet)
Hej Annemette
Her er nogle rettelser:
Juliet had also visited a friend. They had done a lot of homework together and now she was on her way home with some heavy books in her arms. It was a long way for her. She lived at the other side of Chicago.
Juliet was from a huge family with much money. Her father was a boss in a big company in another town near Chicago and he knew how things should go on. Juliet lived in a gigantic and beautiful white house with her mother, her father and her younger sister. She didn't miss anything in her life.
She walked quickly now. She was a little afraid of the dark streets and all the homeless people she saw, and she wished she was home in her safe house. Juliet hoped that none of them would talk to her or even look at her.
She ran very fast now, and suddenly she ran into a boy. She was very suprised and started to pick up her books which she had lost on the street. She looked up and saw directly into the boys face. She thought that he looked very friendly, and she smiled to him.
Ps. 1) Husk stort begyndelsesbogstav efter punktum
2) Husk, at når man fortæller om nogens forældre, bruger man den formelle form "mother and father". "Mom and dad" er meget mere uformelt og bruges, når f.eks. et barn siger : "I love my mom(my)" eller My dad(dy) is the strongest man in the world"
3) Husk ikke at blande tiderne sammen. Hold hele teksten i datid.
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