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Rettelse - Det Haster!
Hej.
Jeg vil gerne have rettet en tekst, som jeg skulle skrive. Det er både tegnsætning, grammatik og ordvalg, som jeg kan få brug for.
I have a kitten named Renesmée, but we usually call her Nessie. She was born in the springs this year and raised up at my neighbours house. She is a sister to one of my other cat, Tiger, who is one year old. I was promised her way before she was born, because my other cat I had, got driven over by a car in front of my house. I’ve been playing with her since the day after she was born, and in that way I created a good relationship with her. Her fur’s colour is grey, white and light brown. She has a long tail, so my family calls her a “rat”. Her legs are really long, but so is her body. Her tail is still longer than her body, when she is standing up. She is very vivid, but very gently. She doesn’t bite, if she doesn’t want to be hold up in your arms anymore. She is an aunt to my sister’s kitten, Nefetiti, and they are playing together most of the time. She loves to walk on the tables and eat people’s food, but most of all she loves being petted at night, when she is supposed to sleep. Sometimes she lies in the couch and is watching TV, and purrs really loud, while the other ones is laying and sleeping next to her. She is very much outside playing and catching mouse, but she also spends a lot time inside and sleep down under a chair. She is a very adorable kitten, and you won’t find one that looks like her in the world.
Tak på forhånd.
Svar #1
29. september 2009 af Hendedensøde (Slettet)
Heej.
Skriver lige "min" version:
I have a kitten named Renesmée, but we usually call her Nessie. She was born in spring this year and raised at my neighbours house. She is sister to one of my other cats, Tiger, who is one year old. I was promised her way before she was born, because the other cat I had, got driven over by a car in front of my house. I’ve been playing with her since the day she was born, and in that way I builede up a good relationship to her. Her fur’s colour is grey, white and light brown. She has a long tail, so my family calls her a “rat”. Her legs are really long, but her body is too. Her tail is still longer than her body, when she is standing up. She is very vivid, but very gently. She doesn ot bite, if she does not want to be held in your arms anymore. She is aunt to my sister’s kitten, Nefetiti, and they are playing most of the time. She loves to walk on the tables and eat people’s food, but most of all she loves being petted at night, when she is supposed to sleep. Sometimes she lies in the couch watching TV, and purrs really loud, while the other cats are laying sleeping next to her. She is outside a lot playing and catching mouse, but she also spends a lot time inside sleeping under a chair. She is a very adorable kitten, and you won’t find one that looks like her in the world.
" I was promised her way" - Kan ikke forstå, hvad du mener?
- Hvis "din" søsters kat Nefetiti ikke er en killing - er det også en kat.
Håber du kan bruge min hjælp (:
Svar #2
29. september 2009 af lisaandersson (Slettet)
"i was promised her(,) way before she was born" - Det betyder at jeg blev lovet hende langt før hun blev født. Det hører sikkert ikke hjemme i denne tekst, men man kan godt sige det. (:
- Hun er en killing, som jeg skrev, men kan ikke se hvordan det kan betvivles?
Nå, men tak for hjælpen! Havde virkelig travlt. (:
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