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07. oktober 2009 af natasjah (Slettet)

I wrote this concerning your immigration test I have glanced at your test and I found a couple issues much irrelevant in circumstances to become a British citizen.

I wondered about Question 8, 11 and 13.
I mean that question 8 first and foremost has to do with people who visit the pubs. And I can’t see how a foreigner can become more British because they no about how to go to pubs I mean that it is more relevant to no the rules of the pubs you have to n½o and it is also in rare occasions someone pint in a pub.

I mean that Question 11 is most relevant for owners of a dog because dog owners have to no what they must have for their dogs.
And to no about what a dog need can’t make a foreigners integrate into British society, the foreigners should rather no what the society needs and what they can do to make the society works.

I think question 13 is out of control, because the society should not determine when you can chose a divorce after eg 6 months or not because it is between the couple to find out when they can’t live together anymore. And it's not something that can make a person to integrate into a society because divorce is an emotional issue and it happens in all society. I do not think you get more British of separating at a given time compared to other countries.

I agree in what Gordon Brown says, because the citizen ship is also a contract between me and the country I will move to
 


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07. oktober 2009 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)

at vide = to know og ikke "no", ret lige det igennem først. Ellers har jeg klammer omkring fejl og noget der kan siges bedre. Har taget det første stykke:

I wrote this concerning your immigration test. I have glanced at your test and I found a couple issues much irrelevant (in circumstances to become) a British citizen.
I wondered about Question 8, 11 and 13.
I mean that question 8 first and foremost has to do with people who visit the pubs. And I can’t see how a foreigner can become more British because they (no) about how to go to pubs I mean that it is more relevant to (no) the rules of the pubs you have to (n½o) (and it is also in rare occasions someone pint in a pub.)
I mean that Question 11 is most relevant for owners of a dog because dog owners have to (no) what they must have for their dogs.


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09. oktober 2009 af Stygotius (Slettet)

"a couple issues"  skal være "a couple of issues" eller bedre "some issues"

Hvordan kan du sætte et  punktum lige foran et    "And"  ???????

"i mean......." skal være "I think......."

Du skriver først "a foreigner can....."  og lige bagefter "they........". Det er vist noget vrøvl. 


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