Rettelse af engelsk stil. HURTIGT TAK

Anorexia is an eating disorder. It’s a psychical illness, who can kill, if it does not get treated.
Anorexia, which often is shown in the teenage years, make you starve yourself.
An anorexic thinks of itself, as a ‘fat monster’, even though they often are very skinny.

Anorexia often starts as an innocent slimming diet, which is a success, and then they continue with the diet. (Why stop the success?).  

The anorexic starts eating less and less, and exercise harder and more. However even though they lose weight, they just keep thinking, that they are fat, too fat. “Let’s just lose one more pound.”

It’s mostly girls in the teenage age who are getting the disorder, but all can get it. Boys are also in risk of getting the disorder, but that’s only a very, VERY little part who actually gets it.

1 % of all girls have anorexia. The reason why girls more often get the disorder, is because they are more likely to think of their body as too fat. The reason why girls more often get the disorder, is because they are more likely to think of their body as too fat.
 

At first you cannot, as a normal person, see any change. The only change is mentally. Nevertheless, you will not recognize it. Inside the head of an anorexic person, it is like there is another person, if you could say so.

The person says how wrong it is to eat, that you look like a fat cow. And everyone around you are lying about it, that your parents are disappointed in you. Their daughter has turned into a fat, lazy cow! But the person inside your head will help you.
 

“I will expect you to drop your calorie intake and up your exercise. I will push you to the limit. You must take it because you cannot defy me!”

And that is the beginning of the anorectic lifestyle. The voice will be inside your head 24/7. When you wake up, are in school, at dinner, and when you're going to bed. They cannot get rid of the voice by themselves, they need help. They need to realize that anorexia is never ever going to help them. And that it is a hard thing to do, but they are missing out on their social life: friends and family. They have to come back to the real world. Accept that they have a problem, and get professional help.

Mange tak. Nogle kommentarer til hvad du evt synes? :)

Skal Alkymisten kommentere hvad han selv synes? Selvkritik der vil noget... ;)

Hov glemte at filføje at den bestemt ikke er fejlfri endnu, du må selv arbejde med resten :-)

Prøv endvidere at bruge synonymer frem for et så primitivt sprog (no offence!) :-). Det sproglige giver plusser, forudsat at det srpoglige niveau er højt  :-D

Jamen dog, det er jo engelskeksperten rajkovic! :-) Vi ser ikek så meget til dig synes jeg? Har du holdt ferie? :-P

Ha ha, sjovt ;)

Mange tak. Kan du komme med nogle eksempler på noge af det jeg har lavet? :D

Ferie vil jeg ikke ligefrem kalde det -- sidder p.t. og roder med to tolvsidersopgaver (universitetsniveau). Emnerne er noget så übersexet som "redegør for trenderne i polsk litteratur umiddelbart efter krigen. Understøt med eksempler fra de fire værker i pensum", for slet ikke at tale om "redegør for de antitotalitære kræfter i Polen i 50'erne og 60'erne. Hvilke var målene, blev de opnået, og hvis ja, med hvilke midler?"

Pissespændende og sååååå relevant for Polen anno 2009.....NOT! :D Men ellers en fed fidus fra universitetets side; i stedet for at bruge penge på løn til underviserne, omdanner man bare hele studiet til en slags aftenskole / et slags selvstudium... Smart... :-/

Damn! Lyder til at jeg skal nyde mine sidste mdr. her som 3.g' er :-) Det er så røv nederen at redegøre for sådan noget, ja undskyld, lort! Er det ike noget med at polen blev delt op i to efter krigen? Og digtere satte fokus på den nationalromantiske poesi med den hensigt at fungere som en fortaler for nationen? Lidt alla romantikken i danmark? 

Well anyways, held og lykek med ophgaven sidder selv med en dejlig SRp omhandlende lineære diffrentiallinginger af anden orden, homogene såvel som inhomogene. Prøv du at finde dne fuldstændige løsning til y''+ay'+by=g(x) x-D

Skifter, slut..

>>Er det ike noget med at polen blev delt op i to efter krigen?

Du tænker på Tyskland.... (BRD og DDR).

Og hvad litteraturbrækket angår, så har jeg bare tænkt mig at skøjte hen over lortet... Det er jo ikke engang et spørgsmål om selvstændigt kognitivt arbejde; det handler bare om at omformulere en masse baljebræk og kalde det ens opgabevesvarelse.

Hvad den der ligning angår...matematikkens svar på Jerzy Andrzejewski og Miron Bialoszewski.... :D