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I’m homeless
I’m homeless. Two years ago, my family died in a air crash on the way to Stockholm. Actually it was my whole family, mom, dad, two sisters, grandparents and my aunt. I wasn’t together with them, because I had to go to school. Lucky me.                                                                                                                                                                                                          Since last year I have been homeless, cause I couldn’t afford my apartment in South London, so I was thrown out. Actually I had a good job and a very nice girlfriend, but first I was my girlfriend unfaithful and after that was I steeling from the shop that I was working in, so my girlfriend broke up and I was fired. Stupid me. Now I don’t have any money and I’m living on the streets in Southampton. When I first came here I didn’t knew anyone, but now I have a very good friend, Kate. She´s an old lady, sixty six years old. She´s been living on the streets for almost ten years. She have been in prison in twenty years and when she was released, she didn’t know what to do. She had no money, no family or no friends.                                                                                                                                                                                                     We are living in a very pure area in Southampton. Now it´s summer, but in the winter is it very cold, last winter was I on hospital two times because I was very cold and very sick. We are sleeping under the same bridge every night. Twice a day, Kate and I are going to a big house where a very nice lady lives. She´s name is Angela. She´s making food to all the pure people in the area. Almost thirty people are coming every day to eat, drink and talk. I think that almost half of them are alcoholics, but not Kate and myself. But nine month ago were I drinking allot, but when I met Kate she said: “If your drinking any more, I’m gone!”, then I gave her my respect and ever since I never touch a bottle of alcohol.                In the future, I want to have a wife, two kids and a beautiful house with a big garden. But I think I have to have a job first. I want to go back study, maybe I want to work in a bank or something like that. That´s my dream.