7.klasses engelsk opgave - skal rettes

Hej er der nogle der vil læse min engelsk historie iggennem.  I må rette som i vil bare det kommer til at blive godt.

På forhånd TAK! :D

Seasidehotel.

The story start with an old coachman followed a girl and her parents to a seaside hotel and their luggage was on top of the coach. The coachman said to Sophie if you’re not careful you’ll soon meet the ghost rider. Sophie gets to the sea, she could see some men with straw hats and bathing suits and the ladies had parasols. She meets a boy and he had saved her life. The boy said that he would meet her at night. It was a windy day. She was going to meet the boy. His name was Henry. Henry would tell the truth to Sophie about The Ghost Rider. When they were on the way Henry told Sophie about The Ghost Rider. Henry told also at The Ghost Rider had a pony-tail and a funny hat like the ones they had in the old days. When they were on the beach they saw a man who looked just like The Ghost Rider. He rides a horse and he had a lamp with him. Sophie and Henry where hidden in the grass. The man who looked like The Ghost Rider came in front them. He was scary but not a ghost rider. He was the wreck-master.The next day they could see a lot of ships on the coast. They went into a ship and they found a yellow glove. All the fishermen had the yellow gloves. Henry and Sophie go home because they could not understand what a happened. Sophie sleeps and suddenly dreams her about The Ghost Rider. So next day they go to the wreck-master and tell it to him. He could not help them and suddenly transform her to The Ghost Rider. The story end with the ghost rider goes away on his horse.