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The two texts have the same main theme but to different genres (eller ville måske skrive "are two different genres"). “The Grasmere Journals (1802)”(Text one) is a short essay from Dorothy Wordsworth, and it is (synes det lyder bedre) about the observation of the nature (overvej at skrive nature uden "the" foran, medmindre det er et bestemt naturområde). We hear a clear description of how beautiful the daffodils are. “I wandered lonely as a cloud” is a poem from William Wordsworth (1804) and is about the same (evt: subject) as “The Grasmere Journals”, but it is written differently ("but it is written in a different way" lyder bedre). The language in “The Grasmere Journals” differs from the language of “I wandered lonely as a cloud” in its use of proverb. Text one is an essay about the writer's daily life, where she observes the nature. It’s not difficult to read and understand the text (har slettet et komma) because of the simplicity and the descriptive language, which also makes clear the imagery, “some rested their heads upon these stones as on a pillow for weariness….” . The writer also gives us a vivid image of the flowers, through the descriptive language “I newer saw daffodils so beautiful they grew among the mossy stones about and about them….,”. 
Unlike this text  “I wandered lonely as a cloud” is a poem with (har slettet komma) the rhymes A-B
“ I wandered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o'er vales and hills,
When all at once I saw a crowd,
A host, of golden daffodils” which makes the poem interesting to read. There are
many imageries, for example.“ Continuous as the stars that shine, And twinkle on the milky way” Because there are so many flowers, it reminds the writer of the Milky Way. And he also uses some metaphors “ When all at once I saw a crowed, a host, of golden daffodils” here he compares daffodils to a crowd of people.

The similarities between these two texts are that they were written in the same time, the Romanticism which started in the 1800’s. Another similarity between the two poems is the main theme which is the daffodils in the nature. Even though he uses a lot of imagery in both of the texts he is able to make a neutral language to read the texts (jeg deler lige sætningen op. måske kunne su skrive "and that makes it easy to read the text, hvis det er det du mener. og så ville jeg lave punktum herefter. Du skriver i starten at de to digte er skrevet af forskellige forfattere. men nu skriver du at "han bruger en masse billedsprog i begge tekster". skal du ikke skrive at "begge forfatterne bruger meget billedsprog"?) The writers also make a kind of humanity (har du slået ordet op? kan ikke finde det nogen steder..), because they humanize the flowers/ Daffodils (ville nok nøjes med et af ordene, og ville ikke skrive daffodils med stort) when they write that they are dancing in the breeze which makes the act more lively.

åhh hvor er det skønt af dig.! TUSINDEEE TAK SKAL DU HAVE. er virklig glad for det. :)

Det var så lidt :)