Nogle der vil hjælpe mig med at rette en engelsk oversættelse til dansk ?

Ville spørge om der var nogle, som ville rette min engelsk oversættelse til dansk ? Håber der er nogle, som vil hjælpe..

Engelsk:

Marilyn is often held partially responsible for causing the Columbine shooting. What is the connection between Manson and Columbine? Were the shooters influenced by the music or actions of Marilyn? Consider Manson´s words in an article writen in Rolling Stone on May 28, 1999.

It was unthinkable that these kids did not have a simple black-and-white reason for their actions, And so a scapegoat was needed. I remember hearing the initials report from Littleton, that Harris and Klebold were wearing makeup and were dressed like Marilyn Manson, whom they obviously must worship, since they were dressed in black. Of course, speculation snowballed into making me the poster boy for everything that is bad in the world. These two idiots weren´t wearing makeup, and they weren´t dressed like me or like goths. Since Middle America has not heard of the music they did listen to the media picked something they thought was similar. When it comes down to who´s guilty. We are the people who sit back and tolerate children owning guns, and we are the ones who tune in and watch the up-to-the-minute details of what they do with them.
Responsible journalists have reported with less publicity that Harris and Klebold were not Marilyn Manson fans - that they even disliked my music. Do you think entertainment inspired Kip Kinkel, or should we blame the fact that his father bought him the guns he used in the Springfield, Oregon, murders?
I chose not to jump into the media frenzy and defend myself, though I was begged to be on every single TV show in existence. I didnt want to contribute to these fame-seeking journalists.
 

Oversat til Dansk:

Marilyn er ofte holdes delvist ansvarlig for at have forårsaget Columbine shooting. Hvad er forbindelsen mellem Manson og Columbine? Var skytter påvirket af musik eller foranstaltninger af Marilyn? Overvej Manson ord i en artikel skrevet i Rolling Stone, den 28. maj 1999.

Det var utænkeligt, at disse børn ikke har en enkel sort-hvid grund for deres handlinger, Og så en syndebuk var nødvendigt. Jeg husker høre bogstaverne rapport fra Littleton, at Harris og Klebold var iført makeup og var klædt ud som Marilyn Manson, som de naturligvis skal tilbede, da de var klædt i sort. Selvfølgelig rullede spekulation i at gøre mig den plakat drengen til alt hvad der er dårligt i verden. Disse to idioter var ikke iført makeup, og de var ikke klædt som mig, eller som goterne. Da Mellemamerika ikke har hørt om den musik, de lyttede til medierne plukket noget, de troede var ens. Når det kommer til, hvem der er skyldig. Vi er de mennesker, der sidder tilbage og tolerere børn eje kanoner, og vi er dem, der tune ind og se op til de nyeste oplysninger om, hvad de gør med dem.
Ansvarlig journalister har rapporteret med mindre omtale, at Harris og Klebold ikke var Marilyn Manson fans - at de endnu ikke brød min musik. Tror du, underholdning inspireret Kip Kinkel, eller skal vi skyde skylden på, at hans far købte ham kanonerne han brugte i Springfield, Oregon, mord?
Jeg valgte ikke at springe i medierne vanvid og forsvare mig selv, selvom jeg var bad om at være på hver enkelt tv-show i eksistens. Jeg gjorde ikke ønsker at bidrage til disse Ry-søger journalister.