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Lidt rettelse
Hej, nogle der gider og tjekke den her mini tekst for mig:-) og hvis I har lidt ekstra fyld til siger jeg ikke nej :-)
Love between parents and children is the most special love, it’s a love which is born, from the child’s arrive. Parents always care about their children whatever happens and however how many old they are. They love them, and they will always love them, because they are a part of them.
PS. Haster
Svar #1
04. februar 2010 af Knotz (Slettet)
The love between parents and children is the most special kind of love, it’s a (evt. the istedet for a) kind of love which is born from the child’s arrive arival (overvej evt. andet ord). Parents always care about their children whatever happens and however how many old they are (hvad vil du gerne skrive? Det giver ingen mening, det der står). They love them, and they will always love them, because they are a part of them.
Du har nogle sætninger hvor du skriver "they ... them" hvor jeg gerne ville udskifte enten "they" med "parents" eller "them" med children, så det bliver mere læseligt.
Svar #2
04. februar 2010 af Stygotius (Slettet)
Love between parents and children is the most special sort of love, it’s a love which (is) was born(, from the child’s arrive) the day the baby came into the world. Parents always care about their children whatever happens and no matter (however) how (many) old they are. They love them, and they will always love them(,) because they are a part of them.
Svar #4
05. februar 2010 af Stygotius (Slettet)
Man kunne nok med held stryge "a" foran part i sidse linje.
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