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Hej, er lige blevet færdig med en engelsk lille opgave og tænkte på om der var nogle der gad og kigge den igennem for mig og rette eventuelle fejl på forhånd tak. :-)
Many problems in our life are caused by love.
For example if a boy loves a girl and the girl doesn’t loves him or the opposite.
Or if a person can’t find the right person in his life.
Or if two persons are in love, and wants to get married but the girls’ or the boy’s parents don’t allow the marriage because of money, force, religion or because they want the daughter to marry one of her family, or many other reasons.
I have heard about many sad love stories, because of those reasons. We have also in the class, read some love stories where those reasons take place.
For example the story about Romeo and Juliet by William Shakespeare it’s a story about two youngsters who come from families that do not love or even hate each other, or the story about Bernadette and Gordon, this is a story about two young couples who got into trouble because they belonged to different religions.
There are many sort of forbidden love:
Many times love is forbidden because of race and religion, especially now, when many people settle or travel to different countries.
For example a Muslim girl. A Muslim girl is not allowed to marry a guy with another religion than her own, so the guy also has to be a Muslim.
For the most times, it never works, even though the guy wants to be a Muslim, the girl’s parent wouldn’t accept it, and they wouldn’t consider him as one of them. And then the girl is in a dilemma, if she chooses her lover, then she will lose her family and maybe even loose herself, and if she chooses her family she will lose her lover. We have seen a film in the class, the film is called the lover, the film is also a sort of forbidden love.
The lover is about, an illegal affair between a teenage French girl and a rich Chinese man, but the girl’s family was against Chinese and the Chinese’s dad want his son to marry a girl from a rich family.
Another kind of forbidden love can be love between a child and an adult.
For example if we take Denmark. In Denmark there is a law, which forbids all young people less than 15 years to have a relationship with an adult, a person up over 18.
PS. HAster
Svar #1
06. februar 2010 af Mundo (Slettet)
Her er nogle rettelser :)
Many problems in our life are caused by love.
For example if a boy loves a girl and the girl doesn’t love him or the opposite.
Or if a person can’t find the right person in his life. (overvej om du kan undgå at starte begge sætninger med "or")
Or if two people are in love and want to get married but the girls’ or the boy’s parents don’t allow the marriage because of money, force, religion or because they want the daughter to marry one of her family, or many other reasons.
I have heard about many sad love stories, because of those reasons. We have also read some love stories in the class in which those reasons take place.
For example the story about Romeo and Juliet by William Shakespeare. It is a story about two youngsters who come from families that do not love or even hate each other. (We have also read) the story about Bernadette and Gordon, a story about two young couples who got (/get) into trouble because they belonged (belong) to different religions. (synes du skal holde det i nutid)
There are many kinds of forbidden love:
Many times love is forbidden because of race and religion, especially now, when many people settle or travel to different countries.
For example a Muslim girl. A Muslim girl is not allowed to marry a guy who has another religion than her, so the guy also has to be a Muslim.
Most of the time, it never works, even though the guy wants to be a Muslim, the girl’s parent wouldn’t accept it, and they wouldn’t consider him as one of them. And then the girl is in a dilemma, if she chooses her lover, then she will lose her family and maybe even lose herself, and if she chooses her family she will lose her lover. We have seen a film in the class, the film is called the lover, the film is also a sort of forbidden love.
The lover is about an illegal affair between a teenage French girl and a rich Chinese man, but the girl’s family is against Chinese, and the Chinese’s dad wants his son to marry a girl from a rich family.
Another kind of forbidden love can be love between a child and an adult.
For example if we take Denmark. In Denmark there is a law, which forbids all young people under 15 years to have a relationship with an adult, a person who is over 18 years old.
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