en rettelse fra jer, PLEASE !?

Based on the movie "The beach", and the text "Blink and you miss it", we often travel to experience something new, and learn about new cultures.
If you are traveling on your own, you can learn to communicate with others, which requires some courage, because you can become involved in some dangerous situations.
But it can also be a very positive experience, you can discover many beatiful things.

Young people only looking after to experience something unusual and extra exciting, which they are not accustomed to. Jeg forstår desværre ikk ehvad du mener emd denne sætning, og kan derfor ikke rette den (:
 

Sometimes people just want to close their eyes and imagine something wonderful could happen. Therefore we travel, to discover another ‘’world’’ we don’t live in.
If we compare this generation with the previous, we can conclude that our generation of young people travel more frequently. The reason is, in my opinion, that they are able to make decisions for themselves, and are therefore more independent.

I remember last summer when I was in Macedonia to visit family, who are located around the Balkans. That summer there were many weddings, which affected me in a way, so that I imagined myself getting married at this age. First it was my cousin who got married to a young Albanian girl. Afterwards it was my other cousin, and I realized that weddings were pure stress. And when I came back to Denmark, I though back, and said to myself that the summer would be unforgettable, as I felt that it couldn’t be called holiday, with all the weddings and celebrations

Det er lidt svært at rette den, når man hverken kender filmen, teksten eller ved hvad opgaven går ud på. Men jeg har lavet en hurtig rettelse, håber at det hjælper (:

jov tak ' :)
det kan jeg sagtens godt bruge. :)