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There are several different (lyder lidt kluntet med "several different". lidt dansk. du burde nøjes med en af dem) points of view and they are used in different ways. It is the narrator's inner voice - the voice that is in our mind when we read the text that (lyder som om det er teksten der skaber action og identifikation, hvor det jo er den indre stemme. :). Derfor ville jeg omformulere sætningen) creates an action and identification, which makes it more exciting for the reader.
The three short stories I have read are written in their own ways (of what.. Writing?) and deal with three completely different topics. Text one is written in first person narrator which means that the story is written from his inner vision. It is clear to see the first person narrator because of the way the story is written on fx. “I had been and am; but why WILL you say that I am mad?” words like I characterize the first person narrator, which also makes the story more personal for the reader because you can identify yourself with the story.
You would think that text two and three is written almost in same way but there are some differences. Text two is written in Third Person Dramatic or Objective which means that the narrator observe the people and events from the outside. “ Some were eating food from paper packages” and “Sometimes, from the distance behind them, came the faintest squeal of singing from out of the "fortified" Conservatorium of Music” . Here he only sees what they do and sometimes hear them singing, but the narrator cannot (lav ikke sammentrækninger i skriftligt arbejde) tell what they talk about or what they think. It’s easier to acquaint (men lidt mærkeligt ordvalg) with the last text because it is written in Third Person Limited which means that the narrator focuses on feelings and can describe people's thoughts and feelings. This makes the text more lively and recognizable, because we hear about a situation that can happen for everyone.
The text affects the readers in different ways, because the narrator uses different points of view which also makes some stories more personal and some more closed which means that is difficult to identify oneself with the situation.

Hvilket niveau og klassetrin er det på? B? Men har lige rettet det jeg kunne finde. (ordvalg og kongruens. Ikke komma.) Håber du kan bruge det til noget. :)

-Jakob Friis