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Dear Andy.

I am the dad to one of Them you shoot, Jason was his name.
I have to write to you, its all I think about, and my only question is how can you did it?! You don’t know how much pain you have given me, you cant don’t imagine how hurt it is, he was my only son and now he long long away because of you, well, fair I know there are some thing wrong I the world, but why should you shoot my son, why you don’t cut take another one, had he doing something to you? And yes I know you maybe have some problems with your live, but that means not you need to give a lot people problems. But one thing should you now and that is I hope you can change you when you are in prison, and you have a lot I time to do it, but don’t misunderstand me, I not only enables you to blame for my son's death, there are many more who have debt, almost all of society.
but I have an offer and it is that I come one day and visit you in jail, and then we can talk about what has happened and you can give me your version of the case. I am sure you have something you want to talk about what has happened. I've got it so a comprehensive that I can come and visit you, show you want it. But after all I moved forward, although I will never forgive you. t is more so I will have to write a letter to the president, must now be done about this problem, the whole country should pay more attention to it and I want to start a campaign "bullying can kill" and I have already made agreements with Hillary Clinton, who must stand as speaker for this campaign. and furthermore, you know I want to call your parents and ask how it could end so bad, they should also take their responsibilities in this matter. But I hope soon and get your acceptance and visit you,

hjælp tak.

Dear Andy, (komma, når der skrives brev)

I am the dad to one of Them (those that) you shoot(.) Jason was his name (His name was Jason) .
I have to write to you, its all I think about, and my only question is (;) how can you did it?! (mener du: 'why did you do it'.) You don’t know how much pain you have given me, you cant (can't) don’t (don't skal fjernes, men ikke 'can') imagine how hurt it is (NEJ! How much it HURTS me), he was my only son and now he (he IS) long long (long, long)away because of you. (.) well (Well,), fair  (fair enough.) (" I know there are some thing wrong I the world") UFORSTÅLIGT! Hvad vil du udtrykke? Skriv det på dansk! , but why should you shoot my son (but why did you shot my son?), why you don’t cut take another one (Why couldn't you pick another one?), had he doing something to you (Had he done someting to you)? And yes(,) I know you maybe  (may) have some problems with your live, but that means not (doesn't mean) you need to give a lot people problems (you have to cause problems on other people) . But one thing should you (you should)  now  (know) and that is I hope you can change you when you are in prison, and you have a lot I time to do it (UFORSTÅLIGT! Hvad vil du sige på dansk?), but don’t misunderstand me, I not only you to blame for my son's death (not only do I blame you for my son's death), there are many more who have debt (Skriv på dansk, hvad du vil sige! Det er temlig uforståligt.) , almost all of society.
but I have an offer and it is that I come one day and visit you in jail (I come and visit you in jail one day), and then we can talk about what has happened and you can give me your version of the case. I am sure you have something you want to talk about what has happened. I've got it so a comprehensive that I can come and visit you (UFORSTÅLIGT. Sig det på dansk), show you want it. But after all I moved forward (Ville nok sige, 'I've moved on), although  (,however,) I will never forgive you. t is more so I will have to write a letter to the president(.) must now be done about this problem (Something must be done to solve this issue), the whole country should pay more attention to it and I want to start a campaign (called) "bullying can kill" and I have already made (agreements with Hillary Clinton, who must stand as speaker for this campaign. and  (And) furthermore, you know I want to call your parents and ask how it could end so bad, they should also take their responsibilities (responsibility) in this matter (conflict). But I hope soon and get your acceptance and visit you (Mener du: 'I do hope that I'll obtain an acceptance to come and visit you?). Ellers kan du sige, hvad du vil sige på dansk.

NB!

Vær opmærksom på, at engelsk har ligefrem ordstilling, untagen ved spørgende sætninger, og, når en sætning indledes af adverbier (biord) såsom : 'Hardly, never nor'

Pas på ikke at skrive alt for lange sætninger. Skriv kortere sætninger ved fremtidige engelsk stile og sæt mange punktummer.

 Du kunne evt. skrive, 'Sincerely,' og et navn forneden, da der er tale om et brev.