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1. Discuss the important of following factors in your own life and the lives of your peer’s race nationality religion family neighbourhood?
The most important in my life is how I’m with myself, my family and others. I’m a Turk girl from Denmark and think I have a perfect life, this is the most important factor. To live in another country is not so easy because you have to be and do like them, if you want a good relation to the inhabitants and at the same time continued with your own culture.
3. ¨They need to belong to a gang as a form of protection¨. What kinds of protection can gangs provide?
Gangs can provide their own weapons and there is solidarity, when one of them get into trouble and need help, they take deal about you. When a person becomes member of a gang, they get respect, because the gangs already have respect from their surroundings and they get money maybe also job.
4. If you had teenage children, what would you do to make sure that they won’t be recruited by gangs?
When I get a child, I would explain that a gang is not a good example, because it has disadvantages- use of drugs and violent crime, which could totally ruin your life.
I would try to explain my child as much as possible the good things, because primarily I think its parents, who must take responsibility and take care of their children.
I want to show and teach all bad sides and drawbacks. Therefore I want to have my children learn about my own religion, culture and traditions and show love and solidarity in a family and show respect for each other. I would do my best and know about their Circle of Friends to have some idea about what type they are.
Svar #1
20. marts 2010 af Tamanna (Slettet)
1. Discuss the important of following factors in your own life and the lives of your peer’s race nationality religion family neighbourhood?
What is important to me in life is the way I treat myself, my family and others. Being a Turkish girl who lives in Denmark, I believe that I have a rather perfect life, and this is important as living in a foreign country is far from easy; one has to follow a different culture in order to maintain a good relation to the natives. At the same time, one must also follow own culture and traditions.
3. ¨They need to belong to a gang as a form of protection¨. What kinds of protection can gangs provide?
Gangs can provide their own weapons and there is solidarity, when you get in troubles and need help, the gang stands up for you. When a person becomes member of a gang, they get respect, because the gangs already have respect from their surroundings and they get money maybe also job.
4. If you had teenage children, what would you do to make sure that they won’t be recruited by gangs?
I would explain the consequences of becoming a member of a gang and explain the risk one takes; usage of drugs, violence, and crime: lives are ruined by these factors.
I believe parents are responsible for taking care of their children, so I would try to tell about the good things that do not link gangs in them. I would like to show and teach the negative aspect of it. Therefore I like my children to learn about my religion, culture and traditions, and thus show the love, solidarity and respect in a family. I would try my best to keep an eye on their friends and other who they interact with just to have an idea about the personality they have.
/Tamana :)
Svar #2
20. marts 2010 af Andersen11 (Slettet)
1. Discuss the important importance of the following factors in your own life and in the lives of your peer’s peers: race, nationality, religion, family, and neighbourhood? .
Svar #3
20. marts 2010 af Stygotius (Slettet)
1. Alt det der står med fede bogstaver er dårligt.
2. Hvem i alverden har dog formuleret disse spørgsmål ?? ....................skulle det være engelsk ?
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1. Discuss the important of following factors in your own life and the lives of your peer’s race nationality religion family neighbourhood?
The most important -important what ?? - in my life is how I’m with myself, my family and others. I’m a Turk girl from Denmark and think I have a perfect life, this is the most important factor. To live in another country is not so easy because you have to be and do like them like who ?, if you want a good relation to the inhabitants and at the same time continued with your own culture.
3. ¨They who ?? need to belong to a gang as a form of protection¨. What kinds of protection can gangs provide?
Gangs can provide their own weapons and there is solidarity(,) when one of them ?? get into trouble and need help, they take deal about you. When a person becomes member of a gang, they who ? get respect(,) because the gangs already have respect from their surroundings and they get money maybe also job.
4. If you had teenage children, what would you do to make sure that they won’t be recruited by gangs?
When I get a child, I would explain that a gang is not a good example(,) because it has disadvantages- use of drugs and violent crime, which could totally ruin your life.
I would try to explain my child as much as possible the good things(,) because primarily I think its parents, who must take responsibility and take care of their children.
I want to show and teach all bad sides and drawbacks. Therefore I want to have my children learn about my own religion, culture and traditions and show love and solidarity in a family and show respect for each other. I would do my best and know about their Circle of Friends to have some idea about what type they are.
Svar #4
20. marts 2010 af Tamanna (Slettet)
Hi Stygotius.
I think you're wrong about the "when I get a child".. I'm not saying its competely wrong, its just something you say in Danish "når/hvis jeg får et barn" Because by using "get" it seems as if you get it - and not give birth to it. So I suggest "have" as in "if I have a child"
And yes, the questions seem very.... retarded. But I assumed the questions were meant to sound like that.
Svar #5
20. marts 2010 af Stygotius (Slettet)
I didn't mean that the questions were silly, but that the English language in them was quite bad.
I don't understand your sentence: "I think you're wrong about the "when I get a child".. I'm not saying its competely wrong."
-it makes no sense.
A better way to put your phrase would be: "I would try to explain to my children that........"
Svar #7
21. marts 2010 af Tamanna (Slettet)
Stygotius
What I meant was that the questions are phrased wrongly.
When you say "if I get a child" it doesnt mean the same thing in Danish "når jeg får et barn" but it means that someone gives you the baby or yu buy it. You receive the child from someone and it doesnt mean that you have given birth to the child. Det lyder som om du har "fået eller købt" barnet. Forstår du det nu?
Svar #8
21. marts 2010 af Stygotius (Slettet)
Hmm, måske -til en vis grad.
Naturligvis hedder "at få et barn" "to have a baby"
Det mest naturlige engelsk i den nævnte sammenhæng ville dog stadig være mit forslag:
I would try to explain to my children that.................
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