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Year 3012, four years before Aicha was born, a peace agreement was made, between the planet Gaia and the planet Averus. Most important a law was made; it was forbidden that a human and an L’vi got children together. The law was made to protect the two planets. A human and an L’vi’s progeny will be born with totally destructive force, and the two planets leader would not take that risk, so they banned pregnancies between humans and L’vi’s.
The Earth (gik en mørk tid I møde), the next four years almost 2 million children were killed by soldiers because they were half-bloods. Only 12 half-bloods survived.
The survivors were placed different places on Earth with new identities and unaware of their past.
Remarkable no half-bloods were born on Averus, until the day Aicha was born.
Aicha’s parents Mr. and Mrs. Embry knew it was dangerous that they got a child together, and when they found out that Averus leader knew about Aicha’s existence, they had no other options that bring their daughter to safety. A close friend to Mrs. Embry brought Aicha to Earth when she was two years old. It was to (farligt) for her Aicha to stay on Averus. Her parents knew they had to stay; if they wanted to fight for their case and their right to get children together.
A week after Aicha was brought to Earth, Mr. and Mrs. Embry was found murdered. The citizens blamed the government, but they denied knowledge to the murder. Deep inside the citizens knew it was not the government who killed the couple but one of most dangerous people on Earth, the half-blood Sherlock the Hunter.