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Fifteen years has passed by and Aicha grew up and became a beautiful and clever young lady unaware about her past and her gift.
Everything seemed to be perfect, but it was not. Aicha found a letter in her “mother’s” desk, a letter she never should have found.
The letter contained a whole list, about every surviving half-blood’s on Earth. Aicha’s name was on that list and she knew what that meant.
Everything fell into place, her strange dreams about her past, and the strange things she had experienced; voices in her head, close friends who died, dead flowers, flowered again after she had touched it, and also why she felt different.
A year passed by and her anxiety to be found became bigger and bigger.
She was so scared of everything; she knew it could mean her death, if someone found out that she was a half-blood, so she ran away hoping to save her own life.
She vanished for two years and in that time, she found her inner calm/peace and she learnt how to handle her powers.
Aicha became quickly a national hero; she had rescued over 1 million people, from the evil half-bloods, who only wanted to create fear and panic among the humans and the L’vi’s.
All citizens knew that this superhero was a half-blood; only half-bloods had so devastating powers. This half-blood was different compares with the other surviving half-bloods; she put her life in danger in order to save other people.
It was not the biggest problem that Aicha quickly became a national hero. The biggest problem was that every newspaper worldwide brought pictures and stories about Aicha, and that brought Sherlock the hunter on scent of her.
- Jeg har virkelig brug for en som vil tjekke for fejl, da jeg ikke kan se mine egne fejl.
tuuuuuuuuusind tak på forhånd
Svar #1
11. april 2010 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)
Har du ikke lige haft et indlæg med den? Du bør ikke skrive det samme indlæg to gange.
Svar #2
11. april 2010 af LilleLouiseHansen (Slettet)
Nej denne her er anderledes, da jeg fandt nogle få fejl selv (:
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