refearet rettelse

Hej..kan i hjælpe med at finde grammatik fejl i den tekst....Jeg har prøvet alt hvad jeg kunne.

refearetet skulle være skrevet i nutid.

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Jimmy sr. asks Sharon what that is on television. ‘’Top of the Pops’’ said Sharon. He asks about the remote control when Sharon is getting up. He asks her nicely were she is going. She is going to the toilet. Sharon sits down again. Her father is angry because she was in the toilet from a little while. She explains to him that the uterus is beginning to press into her bladder, and that it is getting bigger. But he doesn’t want to hear these sorts of things from Sharon. He says it is not right. Then Sharon apologized and left the room. Darren comes inside and his father asks him about who is that idiot. Veronica tells him that he can ask without saying idiot. Jimmy sr. didn’t care. Darren laughed and say dad. Jimmy sr. can see what there is in Darren’s mind. He says to him that he can’t have a bike. Darren left the room in protest. He left Veronica and Jimmy sr. by themselves. Jimmy sr. found the remote control that he did been setting on. He changes to a sport channel (baseball) but he does not like it. He Switch to 9 channels but any of them is interesting for him. The door slams and Darren go past the window. Jimmy sr. asks Veronica if it is his birthday for ages. Veronica is not interesting in a bike, because it is too dear. He switches to the baseball again. Then he asks Veronica if there is something on the television tonight. There is never anything said Veronica. He asks Veronica if a ride is out of questions. He is restless and wants to sleep early. Jimmy sr. have to wait until she is finish with the next line. Then he took up to brush his teeth.