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She's leaving home rettelse!

13. september 2010 af Jonas2840 (Slettet)

Hej folkens ;)

Nogle søde, som vil hurtige ret den her kort tekst :)

På forhånd taak..

She’s Leaving Home

It is 5 am as Marie closes her bedroom door she has decided to leave

home and meet with her boyfriend. The life she is currently living is not

what she is aiming for she wants more. She leaves a short note on the

table telling her parents of her situation and walks down the stairs and

out of the door. The sun is rising. Her mother wakes up and walks

towards the toilet. She sees the note on the table and starts reading. As

the truth occurs to her she starts crying. She wakes her husband and

tells him the terrible fact. Their daughter has run away. They both don’t

understand how their daughter could do such a thing and they start

asking themselves why. Her father is mad and tries to calm his wife down

that can’t stop crying. 2 days later she is meeting with her boyfriend at a

café and is enjoying herself and her new life. She is happy now. Her

parents are still wondering what they should have done wrong. Still

wondering what they might have done wrong. Meanwhile she is driving

towards the sunset leaving home, having fun, with her boyfriend. She has

made a dream come true. Money isn’t everything.


I believe she left because she was bored and needed some excitement.

She wants to experience something new and different than just to stay

at home with her parents who only have given her things that money can

buy and not much love. That’s why she meets with this guy I think, to get

the love that she has been expecting but never gotten for so long. She

wants to start a new life on her own. With much love and care for future

generations.


 


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Svar #1
13. september 2010 af Andersen11 (Slettet)

#0 -- Det er samme opgave, som du har startet i to tidligere tråde i dag

https://www.studieportalen.dk/Forums/Thread.aspx?id=887596
https://www.studieportalen.dk/Forums/Thread.aspx?id=887663
 

Der er ingen grund til at starte nye tråde hele tiden om det samme.


Svar #2
13. september 2010 af Jonas2840 (Slettet)

Jaa men vil bare have den rette :)


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Svar #3
13. september 2010 af Andersen11 (Slettet)

#2 -- Det hjælper jo ikke at fylde forumet op med den samme opgave.


Svar #4
13. september 2010 af Jonas2840 (Slettet)

jaa, men stadig..


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