please! er der nogen der vil lige se på min engelsk stil, om i vil rette hvis der var noget fejl? :*

Her kommer lige et par rettelser.. Jeg har ikke rettet alt, kun det mest i øjnefaldende..:)

I 6. linje ville jeg nok skrive "We did a lot of activities"  og "I came to talk to everybody"

Linje 9 "The trip was not that far" Og jeg forstår ikke hvad du mener med "nest".

Linje 10: " And it was not what I expected"

linje 11: We did not have that much time to go to the bathroom at night. And we were not allowed to visit the others rooms."

"The five days at the camp had been positive days"

De sidste tre linjer tror jeg lie du skal kigge på igen.. De er lidt rodede..

It had  been I spent a good time during that month. I met many new people and have made many friends during that period. the month. It had been was difficult for me to find my way around in the school. On the first day at of school I had been was very nervous because I knew no one at all school, apart from my childhood friend Meysaa. But during the second week, we came into our class es. It was a good class; I quickly made became friends with my fellow students.them.
MeanWhile Team A was at camp, we had been at school. We were tested in Danish and mathematics, and there were we made many other activities at school. It had been was a great week because it came to a lot of talking with everyone. During the week I was also good to at finding my way around  in the school.
The following week where team A returned came home from the camp, so should and we (team B) on went to the camp for five days. We drove went by bus. The trip camp was not so far away. Most nest on the first day of camp, we had to make tough business and it was not what I expected. had been waiting for. But it was really nice because we were all together. In the evening we were all tired because of all the activities we did during the day. We did not so spend much time to with going to the bathroom at night. And we may were not allowed to be at others' rooms. If we did so or we got scolding of the teachers were going on at us.
The five days at the camp had been some positive days. Mon We learned many things. It was much more social during the five days. But while even though it was nice to camp, so there were many strict rules. I myself think it was bad that we should were not allowed to be at each other's rooms at night, or to buy candy. It was a little ridiculous, because we could not even eat any sugar.