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27. september 2010 af idabambida (Slettet)

Jeg har lavet min engelsk stil men kan ikke selv rette den, og jeg er i forvejen MEGET dårlig til engelsk, så hvis der er en der har tid til lige at rette det værste?

 

A zoo is a must have.

 

You all walk down the path, on your left you see the tall, yellow giraffe with its big brown spots all over its body, stretching its already long neck, making it even longer to reach the fresh juicy leaves. On your right hand you have the tiny white and fuzzy bunny, jumping around in circles playing with its cute little babies. If you look up into the blue sky, you will see a a big, softly looking, cloud shaped exactly like the big beautiful butterfly flying around you head. The ice cream in your hand is slowly melting, and you have a mix between chocolate and vanilla ice cream running down your hands, but it doesn't even matter, because mother is already ready with a wet cloth to wipe it off. You have spend a whole day in the local zoo looking at all the animals playing around in its big cages. You have had a wonderful time with friends and family. - A sweet memory I believe we all have.

Yes the cages might not be as good as in the nature, but nothing is. A scary movie is not as scary without surround sound. It will not always be perfect. If having animals locked up in a zoo is bad, having them in a circus is terrible. But as soon as people are entertained it's okay. You either have to say that nothing where animals are used is right, or just let it all happen. It sounds bad, but really all you have to do is make up your mind.

How often would you as a kid growing up in Africa, or even in Denmark for that matter, be able to see a huge white polar bear wandering around if we didn't have a zoo? Would you ever let go of the feeling you get when you see the stars in the eyes of a child, when they for the very first time see something as simple as a colorful bird? Not too long ago I had a camp for kids from the inner Copenhagen staying at my work (a hostel) and we took them out to look at the different animals living in the nature. We found a little red ladybug, and their reaction was “Wow, is it really that small?” To me that was the most odd thing they could have ever said. What did they really expect? Then I realized that they had only seen them on Tv, and the aspect ratio is a lot different from the real thing. What if everybody thought something as simple as a lion was so little that you could just put it in your purse? Would that not be sad? A zoo is to me a must have.

 


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27. september 2010 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)

du skal selv gøre forsøg, før du kan få hjælp


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