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The Essay is about a girl, who is called Ashlee. Ashlee live in California, with her family
Ashlee hat it badly in her class, she feel herself bully, and her classmate is
Debt that her mark is bad. Ashlees parents had decide that they will move.
They have found a big old house, who lie at her grandparents house, and the house is very
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A Monday morning, when Ashlee must go in school she heard a laughter. Ashlee felt it come from the closet. When she get closer and closer, she cut hear voices. She took the closets handle quick and open it. But there was nothing. She cut hear her mom called. Ashlee look very suspicious. She looked at the clock, and the school bus, was comed. She took her school bag, and run out to the bus. Then she came to the school, she run into the classroom. The bus had waiting for her, and it was therefore they all come late. She saw her teacher, go to the classroom. She run so fast she cut, so she cut come into the class, before the teacher. And she did it.

The whole day was boring. Again she sit alone in the class. And again her friends don’t wont her, in the games. Her parents wasn’t home.. When she came into her house, remembered she the closet. She open the closet, and look into it. She saw lots of cases. She removed they all, and then she got a shock. She stood in front of a big door, she had never seen before. The door was locked. She look into the cases to find the keys to the door. Then she find a key ring, with keys. She try all the keys, but then there was only one left. She took the key, put it into the keyhole. And it was the right key. Because the door was know open. She get in , and there was nothing, it was white all over. But then she saw a black door. When she open it, was there a new world. And it was a magic world. She saw fairy , and animals. Then she heard a voice, the voice talking to her. But there was no one. When she look back again she saw a fairy in front of her. She get a shock. But the fairy told her, that there wasn’t to be scary of. Cause in this world, was everything good. Ashlee thought that she was dreaming, but then she fall over a stone. They laugh both. Ashlee told the fairy about her life, that she haven’t a friend, and that she feel bad. The fairy would help Ashlee. The fairy told about the lake, who was inside the forest. It was the Wish Lake. The Fairy showed Ashlee the way to the Wish Lake. It took them about 30 minutes, to go through the forest and to the Wish lake. When they was come, walk Ashlee down to the lake. The fairy told Ashlee, that the only thing she had to do, was say her wish and the next they it will come true. Ashlee said her biggest wish, and the wish was that she will have a happy life and that her family had it good. Then she heard her mom call. The fairy and Ashlee run back to the place. Ashlee told the fairy , that she was very glad to meet the fairy, and that she will come every day. They say goodbye to each other. Ashlee was know intro her bedroom again. She cut hear her mom, she hurried into her bed. Her mom came into her room, she put a letter on the desk, and went back again. Ashlee took the letter and read it. The letter was about, that Ashlee had got a new place into her new school.