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17. november 2010 af Jamennej (Slettet) - Niveau: B-niveau

My opinion of the death penalty is negative because it is inhumane to execute a human being. Every now and then I think that some people deserve to die if they have committed murder just so they can taste their own medicine. Although I still believe that executing someone is just as inhumane as committing a murder is. Another problem is that it costs too much money to find out whether it is the right person you are about to execute. I think life imprisonment is enough punishment. There is also a very big discussion about whether to execute women or not. I think someone like Karla Faye Tucker deserved prison for life or to be executed. She was executed, but many people were in turmoil because she was a woman. I do not understand that because we are all equal human beings, and women as well as men commit crimes.
There has also been considerable focus on black people. This indicates that people are more willing to execute blacks than whites. This is very unfair and racist in my view. In the song about Rubin Carter it is clear that Bob Dylan makes it a big issue that Rubin Carter was convicted wrongly and that he was convicted so quickly only because he is black.
Ultimately, I do not think that we should introduce capital punishment in Denmark because it is extremely inhumane.
 

På forhånd tak.


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17. november 2010 af Stygotius (Slettet)

 Hvorfor lægger du en opgave ind her som du allerede har fået hjælp til og ligefrem har fået rettet igennem én gang  tidligere i tråden "Rettelse af engelsk-stil, 200 ord :-)"  ???????


   

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18. november 2010 af Jamennej (Slettet)

fordi jeg har lavet grammatiske ændringer


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18. november 2010 af rakijovic

Hvorfor så ændre på noget der er blevet rettet? If it ain't broken, don't fix it, sweetheart...!

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18. november 2010 af Stygotius (Slettet)

 Jamennej,

Du har ændret på den måde at du har ført nogle rettelser tilbage til det du selv havde skrevet oprindelig, og det er du da velkommen til. Hvis du ikke har tillid til de rettelser, er det da også din egen sag. Det hele virker bare lidt mærkeligt.


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