En der har lyst til at kigge min engelskafl. igennem? Den er på en side :)

Hej allesammen :)

Jeg har fået til opgave at skrive en side om ''organ donations'', og jeg vil virkelig sætte pris på, hvis der var en der gad kigge den igennem for fejl? Jeg håber super meget på en svar, på forhånd mange tak :)

Organ donation
Everybody knows what ‘’organ donation’’ is, but does everybody really know, how many people who want to be a donor, and how many people who need someone’s help? Everybody has their own opinions about this topic, and in these four texts different opinions appear. The texts focus on the issue of organ donation. All four texts are articles from different websites and newspapers.
While the waiting lists are continuously rising, the proportion who get a transplant is failing, as it is put in text 1.Many people need a transplant, and this number is much higher than the number of donors. Sir Liam Donaldson from Britain wants to increase the number of organs for donation. Every day somebody in Britain dies, and those life can be rescued by a transplant.
A family from Britain lost their daughter because of a brain haemorrhage. The daughter donated her kidneys, liver, corneas, skin tissue and heart valves. When the family, two months later, received a thank-you letter from a young girl who had been the recipient of one of their daughter’s kidneys, the mum tells that it brings the whole thing back to you, but it also makes you realize that some good comes out of it.
People often wait three to five years for donated organs, and each day 17 of them die.
Three out of four transplanted organs come from people who die, and had indicated their willingness to be donors. When people lose somebody they care of, donation is not the first thing they think about. They are often in a time of grief and tragedy, and donation is so far away from them.

Many people in America say that they approve of donation, but only about one person in four has indicated that by signing forms. In Europe more than 90 percent of people are organ donors.
In America rich people live longer and grow fatter. Rich patients are buying kidneys from the poor and desperate. The poor people just want money, and the rich people just want to live longer, but the buyers often catch hepatitis or HIV.
In Iran it is legal to sell organs example kidneys. Donors get $2000-$4000, and the waiting lists has been eliminated.
In Holland the TV-show BNN pitting rival kidney patients against one another in pursuit of a donor organ, but it proved to be a hoax. The show was called ‘’inappropriate and unethical’’.
More than thousand people are on the waiting list for a kidney in the Netherlands, but only 634 kidneys were transplanted in 2006.