Engelsk
rettelse
Hej er der nogle der vil hjælpe mig med at rette mit engelsk for formulering eller andre fejl..:D
Analysis, The first paragraph of the novel, the first few words.
It starts with the Pevensie children and their mother running from their house to a bomb shelter. Edmund turns around to get a picture of their father and Peter runs after him, yelling at him for being so irresponsible.
However, this scene is not how the book begins. The book actually starts with a quiet explanation of why the children had to be sent away from their parents, or evacuated, to live in safety in the countryside during the war.
In the first we become presented by the children which we follow throughout. And we also become presented by the narrator.The narrator knows everything about everyone, it will say. he is omniscient.
Svar #1
06. december 2010 af Stilou (Slettet)
Hey.
Bare lige nogle hurtige ting jeg bemærede da jeg gennemskimtede den:
However, this scene is not how the book begins: Hvis jeg forstår din mening korrekt, at det ikke er denne begivenhed/hændelse der indleder bogen, og dermed skal formuleringen nok være noget i retning af: The book, does not begin with this scene/incident (eller et andet ord for hvad der nu sker)...
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In the first we become presented by the children which we follow throughout: kunne være noget lignende: In the beginning of the book, we are presented to the children, which we follow throughout.
og sidst: we are presented by the narrator.. Hvis vi bliver introduceret til forfatteren, vil det hedde noget i retning af: we also get presented to the narrator, og mere daglig engelsk talesprog til det danske udtryk 'hvilet betyder/hvilket vil sige", kunne være i retning af: which means that he is omniscient.
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