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Eng fordrag! mangler rettelser!!!!!
26. april 2005 af
Seba@ (Slettet)
Hej skal imorgen eftermiddag holder et fordrag i eng.. så ville lige høre om der var nogle som gad at rette det igennem.. på forhånd mange tak..
Anthrax
I would like to talk about anthrax (miltbrand).
Anthrax is an infection caused by the bacteria Bacillus anthracis. Although it's most commonly found in grazing animals like sheep, pigs and horses, anthrax also is used as weapons to infect humans. The anthrax bacteria can be manufactured in a laboratory(easily) - in a more potent form that is more resistant to treatment” than the real”- and the current concern is that man-made anthrax can be used as a biological weapon. Others have tried to weaponize anthrax in the past, without much success. That's because it's extremely difficult to produce anthrax in a form that will deliver enough spores into people's lungs to make them sick. Many thinks that Anthrax is like a flue, and transmit just as easy as a flue. That is wrong.
There are three main types of anthrax:
• cutaneous (skin) anthrax, which can occur if someone handles contaminated animals or animal products (especially animal hides) while they have a cut, abrasion, or rash on the skin
• intestinal anthrax, which can occur if someone eats contaminated meat
• Inhalation anthrax, which is extremely rare but can occur if someone breathes anthrax spores - usually found in the dust kicked up by animals - all the way down into the lungs. If anthrax is used as a weapon, it is this type of anthrax. Because it is, the most deadly of them.
Shortly after the 9/ 11 terrorist deliberately spread Anthrax through the postal system by sending letters with powder containing anthrax. This caused 22 cases of anthrax infection. And those 22 cases is the only known in USA in the last 25 years. So Even though we have heard a lot about anthrax after the 9 / 11. It is a very rare disease. And more than 95% of anthrax cases in the world are from cutaneous anthrax. If you get treated in time, there will be almost 100 percent of surviving. And even if untreated, 80 percent of people who become infected with cutaneous anthrax do not die. The last 20 percent is week people and people infected bye inhalation.
Anthrax
I would like to talk about anthrax (miltbrand).
Anthrax is an infection caused by the bacteria Bacillus anthracis. Although it's most commonly found in grazing animals like sheep, pigs and horses, anthrax also is used as weapons to infect humans. The anthrax bacteria can be manufactured in a laboratory(easily) - in a more potent form that is more resistant to treatment” than the real”- and the current concern is that man-made anthrax can be used as a biological weapon. Others have tried to weaponize anthrax in the past, without much success. That's because it's extremely difficult to produce anthrax in a form that will deliver enough spores into people's lungs to make them sick. Many thinks that Anthrax is like a flue, and transmit just as easy as a flue. That is wrong.
There are three main types of anthrax:
• cutaneous (skin) anthrax, which can occur if someone handles contaminated animals or animal products (especially animal hides) while they have a cut, abrasion, or rash on the skin
• intestinal anthrax, which can occur if someone eats contaminated meat
• Inhalation anthrax, which is extremely rare but can occur if someone breathes anthrax spores - usually found in the dust kicked up by animals - all the way down into the lungs. If anthrax is used as a weapon, it is this type of anthrax. Because it is, the most deadly of them.
Shortly after the 9/ 11 terrorist deliberately spread Anthrax through the postal system by sending letters with powder containing anthrax. This caused 22 cases of anthrax infection. And those 22 cases is the only known in USA in the last 25 years. So Even though we have heard a lot about anthrax after the 9 / 11. It is a very rare disease. And more than 95% of anthrax cases in the world are from cutaneous anthrax. If you get treated in time, there will be almost 100 percent of surviving. And even if untreated, 80 percent of people who become infected with cutaneous anthrax do not die. The last 20 percent is week people and people infected bye inhalation.
Svar #2
26. april 2005 af Mocca Jimmy (Slettet)
Hvis det skal være mundtligt, er det stort set meget godt efter min mening. Forslag/rettelser:
"...is used as weapons.." skal nok laves om til "...is used as weapon..." (uden s, den betyder flertal)
The anthrax bacteria can be manufactured in a laboratory(easily)- flytte easily, så det bliver "can be easily manufactured"
Many thinks - om til many think (igen, uden s'et)
and transmit just as easy as a flue - her skal der derimod et s på transmitS
Because it is, the most deadly of them. - fjern kommaet
after the 9/ 11 terrorist - et s på terroristS
those 22 cases is the only - are the only, ikke 'is'
So Even though we have heard a lot about anthrax after the 9 / 11. It is a very rare disease - lave om til én sætning med et komma (So even though we have heard a lot about anthrax after the 9/11, it is a very rare disease)
The last 20 percent is week people and people infected bye inhalation. - are i stedet for 'is' og by i stedet for 'bye'
Det er hvad jeg har at sige. Held og lykke med oplægget! ;)
"...is used as weapons.." skal nok laves om til "...is used as weapon..." (uden s, den betyder flertal)
The anthrax bacteria can be manufactured in a laboratory(easily)- flytte easily, så det bliver "can be easily manufactured"
Many thinks - om til many think (igen, uden s'et)
and transmit just as easy as a flue - her skal der derimod et s på transmitS
Because it is, the most deadly of them. - fjern kommaet
after the 9/ 11 terrorist - et s på terroristS
those 22 cases is the only - are the only, ikke 'is'
So Even though we have heard a lot about anthrax after the 9 / 11. It is a very rare disease - lave om til én sætning med et komma (So even though we have heard a lot about anthrax after the 9/11, it is a very rare disease)
The last 20 percent is week people and people infected bye inhalation. - are i stedet for 'is' og by i stedet for 'bye'
Det er hvad jeg har at sige. Held og lykke med oplægget! ;)
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