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In the end of the story Miriam thinks about inviting the cab driver inside her house. Her prognosis is that she would ask him in, how they would have sex, how they would end up getting married, how he would use her capital up and then run off with a girl from his own country of his own age. Still she She still invites him inside. Reasons behind her decision could probably be that she has discovered she is a very lonely girl, and she needs somebody to be with her. And the taxi driver seemed as the most right person because he is was as lonely as her she was. (hold i samme tid!) He will never leave her because he just wants.

Hvad mener du her på dansk?: ...how he would use her capital up and the run off with a girl from his own country of his own age. Med "capital", mener du kapital? - jeg ville bruger ordet, fortune, som betyder formue.

He will never leave her because he just wants???

I øvrigt er det nok en god ide at vælge enten, om du vil skrive cab driver eller om du vil bruge taxi driver. Det vigtigste er, at du er konsekvent og bruger det samme ord gennem HELE stilen.

 Der var mange fejl, men tak