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rettelse- hjælp
Hej folkens. En lille aflevering, som jeg skal aflevere i morgen.
En der gider og rette den?
på forhånd tak:)
While I was on the way home, I just couldn’t stop to think how Mrs. Wilson’s behavior was against me. I kept asking myself ’’was that because of me or my color’’? No.. no .. if she didn’t liked me or my COLOR than why would she invite me for lunch? Starnge… I came home… my mom asked me ’’what is wrong Boyd?’’ I said nothing it’s just… I played with Johnny who is a white boy and while we played his mom Mr. Wilson invited me in to join them for lunch. So I joined them.. I liked Mrs. Wilson and of course the food it really taste dilshes… but one thing I didn’t get was… that why she kept asking me about you, dad and my sis ? ’’so what did she asked you about us?’’ what is dad doing? Why you were not work? later she offered me some seconhand clothing and when I refused that she became worse than strange… Boyd’s mom: don’t care about those people Boyd.. Just because we are black it doesn’t mean that we can’t have a successful and respectable life… Boyd: you mean that Mrs. Wilson thought we were poor and got nothing? Boyd’s mom: exactly…
Svar #1
27. februar 2011 af Andersen11 (Slettet)
While I was on the way home, I just couldn’t stop to think how Mrs. Wilson’s behavior was against me. I kept asking myself ’’was that because of me or my color’’? No.. no .. if she didn’t liked me or my COLOR than why would she invite me for lunch? Starnge…
I came home… my mom asked me ’’what is wrong Boyd?’’ I said nothing it’s just… I played with Johnny who is a white boy and while we played his mom Mr. Wilson invited me in to join them for lunch. So I joined them.. I liked Mrs. Wilson and of course the food it really taste dilshes… but one thing I didn’t get was… that why she kept asking me about you, dad and my sis ? ’’so what did she asked you about us?’’ what is dad doing? Why you were not work? later she offered me some seconhand clothing and when I refused that she became worse than strange…
Boyd’s mom: don’t care about those people Boyd.. Just because we are black it doesn’t mean that we can’t have a successful and respectable life…
Boyd: you mean that Mrs. Wilson thought we were poor and got nothing?
Boyd’s mom: exactly…
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Svar #2
27. februar 2011 af jangirkhan (Slettet)
tak for hjælpen. Men jeg forstår ikke hvad det er du har rettet?
Svar #3
27. februar 2011 af Andersen11 (Slettet)
#2
Jeg har blot markeret, hvor der er noget galt, stavefejl, grammatik.
Svar #4
27. februar 2011 af jangirkhan (Slettet)
Hvad med nu ? :)
While I was on way home, I just couldn’t stop to think how Mrs. Wilson’s behavior was. I kept asking myself ’’was that because of me or my color’’? No.. no .. if she didn’t liked me or my COLOR than why would she invite me for lunch? Strange…
I came home… my mom asked me ’’what is wrong Boyd?’’ I said nothing it’s just… I played with Johnny who is a white boy and while we played his mom Mrs. Wilson invited me in to join them for lunch. So I joined them.. I liked Mrs. Wilson and of course the food it really tasted dileshes… but one thing I didn’t get was… that why she kept asking me about you, dad and my sis ? ’’so what did she asks you about us?’’ what is dad doing? Why you were not working? later she offered me some secondhand clothing and when I refused that she became worse than strange… Boyd’s mom: don’t think about those people Boyd.. Just because we are black it doesn’t mean that we can’t have a successful and respectable life… Boyd: you mean that Mrs. Wilson thought we were poor and had nothing? Boyd’s mom: exactly…Skriv et svar til: rettelse- hjælp
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