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Abstract:
The study examines the society, the family pattern and the individual’s socialization from the postwar period until nowadays and which differences that had come throughout the time about, sex role the way you perceive your life and opportunities. The paper describes the society development and compare the industry society and nowadays. Based on the account the paper discuss, with a social point of view, which social conditions there has change, by the use of concepts of social studies and sociology. It is shown that the society is a lot different today from the post war time, because of the revolution, who questioned the traditionally way to life. The society development has made us a lot more individualized and globalized.

Konklusion:

I can conclude that from the postwar time and until now days, many things in the Danish society have changed. The family’s financial circumstances are improved and provide a breeding ground for better education, which the the Social Democrats has helped with. Your opportunities as a child today is a lot better than past time because of the youth rebellion in the 60’s. Today there are a lot of people who are taking a further education. The youth pushed to the ordinary standards that nobody had questioned before. In the industry society the regular story was “like father like son” but that changed under the influence of the young rebel’s new reflecting way of thinking. Today you can be whatever you want to. The youth rebellion got a move on, to the society today, because of their nontraditional thinking that make people consider their way to life and how far they should keep their traditional. Secondary socialization is become a big part of the way children grows opposite the family's upbringing in the industry society. The social relations became different for the reason that you don’t choose your circle of acquaintances and partner on the basis of locality or social class but on account of interests and individual opinion. Because of our growing globalization, the risk society has change through the time. Past time your risk was noticeable contrast the risk today. Nowadays you’re aware of the consequence of your choices and because of that you have to be confident in the expert’s advices.