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jeg har eget svært ved at se mine grammatiske fejl desværre, og håber derfor i kan hjælpe.. Jeg er særligt i tvivl om denne del af min opgave, så håber i måske kan se lidt på det .. tak skal i have 

<p style="margin-top:0cm;margin-right:0cm;margin-bottom:11.25pt;margin-left: 0cm;line-height:150%"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language:EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-weight:bold">The contents of the cuff do not exactly tell what the article is about, but what its theme is. It means a lot to the excitement of the article and the reader’s interest in keep on reading. The reader will be forced to read a big part of the article to get the whole story with Zena and Jack, and how widespread honour killing is today. The article is written in an eloquent language, but it does not prevent the ordinary inhabitants from understanding the issue. The article does not appeal to everyone in the UK because the reader should be able to reflect the topic, have some knowledge and interest in community to understand the problem the article tries to convey, but the target group is still wide as it is a social problem. </o:p>

<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"; mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-fareast-font-family:Calibri;mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-latin;mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;mso-ansi-language:EN-GB;mso-fareast-language: EN-US;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA;mso-bidi-font-weight:bold">    The purpose of the article is to be an eye opener for people in the UK. The journalist manages to reproduce a realistic picture of the situation and she involves the story about Zena and Jack to make
people see the tough reality. This topic has become more relevant in the UK today. “There are an estimated 5.000 honour killings a year worldwide...with about 12 thought to happen in the UK. But Mr. Baker said:”Without doubt this is only the tip of the iceberg.”(page 1 lines 23-25).  The marriage between Zena and Jack must be an inspiration to all the girls in the UK who live with the same problem and are at risk of being subjected to honour killings. It is important that something will be done about it, but the exposed girls need to come more to light.
     The message the journalist wants to get through in the article is how important it is to make people aware about the subject “honour killings” and how important it is that the exposed girls react otherwise the government or the police will never be able to improve their effort.