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Nogle der vil tjekke for fejl?
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"In the viewed video clip, we are presented with the problematic issue, that drinking is a very vast problem in today’s society. The British Medical Association has made a report about this very issue concerning the various medical harms triggered by significant drinking. The BMA mentions that products are deliberately designed to lure the youth of the nation into thinking alcohol is a customary part of life. In order to stop the underage drinking, doctors request a complete ban on alcohol advertising. Professor Gerard Hastings talks about the fact that the youth of the UK is being incited to start a life style, which will harm their health. Afterwards Michael Thompson express his opinion on this matter and states that there are regulations in order to prevent media from targeting people under the appropriate age. The department of culture media and sport states that there are no evidence supporting the fact that problems are affected by media advertising alcohol. In addition, the narrator explains how the BMA finds this false, and that there is already evidence in the form of viral videos. Furthermore, the BMA also want a tax per unit of alcohol, which is believed to have great influence on the drinks industry."
Svar #1
11. maj 2014 af Amril (Slettet)
In the video clip, we are presented with the problematic issue that is drinking; a vast problem in today's society. The British Medical Association has made a report concerning this very issue and the various medical harms triggered by significant alcohol consumption. The BMA mentions that alcoholic beverages are deliberately designed to deceive the youth of the nation and lure them into thinking that alcohol is a customary part of life. In order to stop underage drinking, doctors have requested a complete ban on alcohol advertising.
Professor Gerard Hastings comments that the youth of the United Kingdom are being incited to embark on a life style which could potentially lead to severe and harmful health effects. Subsequently, Michael Thompson expresses his opinion on the matter and states that there are regulations in place to prevent the media from targeting people under the appropriate age. The department of Culture, Media, and Sports states that there is no evidence supporting the fact that the media is contributing to the issue by advertising alcohol.
Moreover, the narrator explains how the BMA claim that such a statement is false and insists that evidence exists in the form of viral videos.
Svar #2
11. maj 2014 af Stygotius (Slettet)
In the video clip, we are presented with the problematic issue that (is) of drinking; it is a vast problem in today's society. The British Medical Association has made a report concerning this very issue and the various medical harms??? triggered by (significant) heavy alcohol consumption. The BMA mentions that alcoholic beverages are deliberately designed to deceive the youth of the nation and lure them into thinking that alcohol is (a customary) part of an ordinary life. In order to stop underage drinking(,) doctors have (requested) called for a complete ban on alcohol advertising.
Professor Gerard Hastings comments that the youth of the United Kingdom are being incited to embark on a life style which could potentially lead to severe and harmful health effects. Subsequently, Michael Thompson expresses his opinion on the matter (and states) stating that there are the necessary regulations (in place) to prevent the media from targeting people under the appropriate age already exist. The department of Culture, Media, and Sports states that there is no evidence supporting the fact that the media (is) are (contributing to the issue) part of the problem (by) when advertising alcohol.
Moreover, the narrator??? (TV presenter??) (explains how) quotes the BMA (claim) as saying that such a statement is false and insists that evidence exists in the form of viral videos.
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