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Her en tekst jeg har skrevet men ved ik om der er fejl i.
Once upon a time in a magical place far from anywhere you know about lived a tyrant called Shahai. Shahai was a very brutal man and he was known to be one of the biggest battle hero. He conquered many countries but he dint watch out for what he took. He took a little village and in that village, there lived a boy named Shijiu. Shijiu dad was a magician, a good one. He knew how to He make his kingdom. The only thigh he should was that he should kill Shahai. He came up with an idea and that was to make a bird fly, through the sky, to the cattle to the evil tyrant Shahai. That bird needed to get some of his hair from shahai because Shijius dad commanded it because he needed it to kill him. Shahai notice it and then he knew that something was wrong and at that moment, he called the best dark magicians to his kingdom. They knew what shijiu’s dad was op to. The tyrant paid them with moutains of gold and silver just to kill him and they accepted the offer. The thing they was actually very simple. They used the hair to kill him, and they succeed.
Svar #2
16. juni 2014 af xamza1608 (Slettet)
#1Jeg kan så fortælle dig, at der er fejl i din tekst.
ja, hvor -_-
Svar #4
17. juni 2014 af Lakey (Slettet)
Once upon a time in a magical place far from anywhere you know about lived a tyrant called Shahai. Shahai was a very brutal man and he was known for being one of the biggest battle hero. He conquered many countries but he didn't watch out for what he took. He took a little village and in that village there lived a boy named Shijiu. Shijiu's dad was a magician, a good one. He knew how to He make his kingdom. The only thing he should killing Shahai. He came up with an idea and that was to make a bird fly, through the sky, to the cattle to the evil tyrant Shahai. That bird needed to get some of his hair from Shahai because Shijiu's dad commanded it because he needed it to kill him. Shahai notices it and then he knew that something was wrong and at that moment, he called the best dark magicians to his kingdom. They knew what Shijiu’s dad was op to. The tyrant paid them with moutains of gold and silver just to kill him and they accepted the offer. The thing they did was actually very simple. They used the hair to kill him, and they succeeded.
Du burde læse dine tekster igen og igen... og højt for dig selv..fremover
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