Rettelse af et debatindlæg

Nogle der kan rette det her, så det bliver så grammatisk korrekt som muligt?? 

»To get intoxicated is always a risky affair and drug addiction is really bad. But there are no proof that sporadic use of cannabis is bad for you. However, there is with alcohol. Cannabis is much less toxic and less likely to lead to violence, « - extract by Mark Kleiman from his book “Marijuana Legalization: What everyone needs to know.”
53 percent of the Danish population votes for the legalization of Marihuana, and 25 % is against the legalization. But the politicians won’t do anything about it. It’s only the Unity list and liberal alliance who think Marihuana should be legal in Denmark. The other parties are against it. It is undemocratic!     
Yes, you’ve heard right! Hash smokers do nothing to hurt anyone, when they sometimes smoke a joint, if their working day is long and stressful - and it’s just like you and I.
It doesn’t matter if we drink some cold after-work beers, have wine with dinner or smoke in our break from work.
Reliable scientific experiments show that you can compare the effects of pot with the effects of tea and coffee, and therefore is it less dangerous then alcohol. 
Pot is a youth phenomenon, and the most people stop when they get to the age of 25-26 years, even if they have smoke a lot. It is pretty much the same with alcohol, because it’s mostly young people who party all night and get drunk. 
Today we are living in a society where alcohol and nicotine are legal. People consume it every single day, then why aren’t it illegal? People die and become disabled when they mount the mountains, ride motorcycles or dive. Should these activities also become illegal? Marihuana is less dangerous, then why is this illegal? 
Think about it…