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hjælp til rettelse af oversættelse

13. januar 2016 af jegbrugerstudieportalen (Slettet) - Niveau: 9. klasse
Nogen som vil rette det jeg har oversat? Jeg har virkelig brug for hjælp da jeg har arbejdet hårdt og gerne vil have rettet det.

Vores venner, Brenda og Brian, er lige taget på ferie; de er kørt ud til deres sommerhus, som de har haft i nogle år. Huset blev bygget for 14 år siden, og da det var blevet færdiggjort, solgtes det til Brendas mor. Senere er moderen død, og Brenda har overtaget huset.
Det er blevet malet og repareret nogle gange, og de har også forsøgt at sælge det, men ingen har ønsket at købe det: tider[ne] er blevet vanskelige.
Da de havde haft det nogle år, blev de enige om at beholde det. De har sommetider lejet det ud til turister, og på den måde har de holdt skindet på næsen .
Sidste sommer blev vi inviteret til en fest i huset; nogle naboer var også bedt om at komme, og da vi dukkede op, blev vi modtaget med åbne arme. Vejret var ikke så godt, så de havde kedet sig og havde tømt adskillige glas, før vi ankom.
Det blev en fed fest – selvom et par af naboerne blev kørt på hospitalet. Vi er kommet hjem i god behold og har allerede planlagt vores næste besøg hos vennerne.

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Our friends Brenda and Brian had gone on holiday; they went out to their cottage, which they have had for some years. The house was built for 14 years ago and when it was finished, it was sold to Brenda's mother. Later the mother died and Brenda has taken over the house. Several times, it has been painted and repaired and they have tried to sell it but nobody has wanted to buy it: the times are difficult.
When they had it for some years, they decided to keep it. Sometimes they have rented it for tourist and in that way, they have kept their ends up. Last summer we were invited to a party in the house: The neighbours were also asked to come and when we came, we were welcomed with open arms. The whether was not great sow they had been bored and had drained several glasses before we arrived.
It became a cool party- even though a couple of the neighbours were taken to the hospital. We came home safely and have already planed our next visit to the friends.

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13. januar 2016 af emmalouise17 (Slettet)

Our friends Brenda and Brian had just gone on holiday; they drove out to their cottage, which they have had for some years. The house was built for 14 years ago and when it was finished, it was sold to Brenda's mother. Later the mother died and Brenda has taken over the house. Several times, it has been painted and repaired and they have tried to sell it, but nobody has wanted to buy it: The times has become difficult. 
When they have had it for some years, they decided to keep it. Sometimes they have rented it for tourist and in that way, they have kept their ends up. Last summer we were invited to a party in the house: some neighbours were also asked to come and when we came, we were welcomed with open arms. The wheather was not that great, so they had been bored and had emptied several glasses before we arrived. 
It became a great party- even though a couple of the neighbours were driven to the hospital. We are arrived at home safely and have already planed our next visit to the friends.


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