Rettelse af stil, 9. klasse.

Hejsa.

Jeg er lige blevet færdig med 3 stile, så jeg har virkelig ikke overskud til at rette dem igennem. Er der eventuelt nogle søde mennesker, som lige kunne se efter fejl, og rette dem?

Tak.                                                                                                                                                        - Anders.

I was really looking forward to something very different and new. I had the maps and my own personal ‘survival’ kit - lots of chocolate and a drink and, of course, my phone to record my new discoveries. I was really excited to start my new adventure. It felt weird travelling alone, as I’d always went with my parents or a friend. It wasn’t a problem though - no worries. I started off, by venturing into the unknown, not knowing what to expect. I was at ground level, so it was quite a distance to travel. It was difficult travelling in such a landscape. It really felt like the mountains were unstable; almost like they could collapse any second. I knew I was overreacting though. My main goal was to make it to the top of the mountain, and, obviously, to just overall get a great experience. Making my way through the forest, I imagined what it’d be like to stand on the top. The view, the fresh air, the cold breeze. It was rough making my way through the trees, though. But I knew there was a road not very far from here - atleast according to my map. I didn’t like the proximity of the trees, they made me feels small, almost insignificant. The only animals I’d seen so far were insects, snails etc., so nothing special. I was really hoping to see something special; maybe a deer or some other majestic animal. Some time passed by and I was relieved to finally find the road that my map showed. Now reaching the top would be a lot easier. Further traveling under those circumstances would completely exhaust me! Once again, some time passed, and as I was very close to reaching the top, I spotted something moving in the far distance. I wasn’t quite sure what it was, but as I moved closer, I eventually realized it was a horde of mountain goats. I wasn’t really expecting to see much at this point, so the sighting amazed me. After admiring the horde for some time, I moved on. Soon after that I reached the top. The view definitely didn’t disappoint me. I settled down and pulled out my ‘survival’ kit. I stayed here for a while and admired the view. Thoughts about life in general came to my mind as I was just sitting there. I do think the vast majority of people get thoughts like this while experiencing similar moments.

It was an amazing experience and it definitely lived up to my expectations. I felt like this experience made appreciate nature and life more than I formerly did.