Engelsk

ret en tekst

11. marts 2020 af roseskole - Niveau: 9. klasse

Nogle der kan rette denne korte tekst ? Ku Klux were some whites in the South formed a racist organization called “ku klux” the name ku klux come from the Greek word kyklos and that means cirkel the meaning behind cirkel is like a way to describe what they saw as the political cycle of government in a community. 

Ku Klux Klan was founded after the Civil War in 1866 as a protest against the blacks newfound rights, and The group's goal was to restore the white supremacy. the ku klux way to get their power back was to get away with the blacks


Brugbart svar (0)

Svar #1
11. marts 2020 af Djuice

The Ku Klux Klan was a formation of white people in the Southern states of America that formed a racist organization called “Ku Klux Klan”. The name ku-klux comes from the Greek word kyklos which means circle. The meaning of circle is a way to describe what they saw as the political cycle of the government in a community. 

The Ku Klux Klan was founded after the American Civil War in 1866 as a protest against the blacks' newfound rights, and the goal of the group (her er tale on en tings genetiv, derfor of the og ikke 'swas to restore white supremacy (måske her nævne hvor?). The way of the Ku Klux Klan to get their power back was to get rid of the blacks. (med hvilke midler og hvordan?)

________________________

Nu har du ikke nævnt formålet med teksten, men jeg tror din lærer vil fortrække at du smækker lidt flere detaljer i den tekst, for at uddybe den mere. Problemet er her, at teksten skaber flere spørgsmål end svar, da den er svagt uddybende.


Brugbart svar (0)

Svar #2
12. marts 2020 af Stygotius

The Ku Klux Klan was a (formation) group, assembly, gang, association, organisation, band of brethren of white people in the (S)southern states of America that formed a racist organization called “Ku Klux Klan”. The name ku-klux comes from the Greek word kyklos which means circle. The meaning of circle is a (way to describe what they saw as the political) cycle (of the government) in a community. 

(Ku Klux Klan har aldrig været en amerikansk regerngs officielle våben, rettet  mod farvede medborgere.. Tværtimod forsøgte en regering i 1870 med den såkaldte "Force-lovgivning" at bremse eller standse de hadske fanatikere)) 

The Ku Klux Klan was founded after the American Civil War in 1866 as a protest against the blacks' newfound rights, and the goal of the group (her er tale on en tings genetiv, derfor of the og ikke 's) Dette er ikke en betingelse for at bruge en of-omskrivning was to restore white supremacy (måske her nævne hvor?). The (way) goal of the Ku Klux Klan to get their power back was to get rid of the blacks. (med hvilke midler og hvordan?)


Skriv et svar til: ret en tekst

Du skal være logget ind, for at skrive et svar til dette spørgsmål. Klik her for at logge ind.
Har du ikke en bruger på Studieportalen.dk? Klik her for at oprette en bruger.