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Hjælp til rette en opgave fra eksamenssæt

15. maj kl. 00:11 af Nora14 - Niveau: B-niveau

Hej 

Jeg har skrevet en engelsk tekst vedrørende assignment 5 opgave. 

Vil en venligt ikke lige fortælle mig hvad jeg har gør bedre til mit næste engelsk tekst og hvilken fejl jeg skal rette.

To Whom It May Concern

I am interested in being a part of your restaurant. I have five years experience in my family's restaurant. I am free now, because I will move to another city, end my family's city. I like to work and want to do kind work. I have read on a website that you are looking at samone good to work in a fast-paced environment and I am good at that.

Yours faithfully


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Svar #1
15. maj kl. 08:49 af Stygotius

I am interested in being (a) part of your restaurant. I have five years of experience in my family's restaurant. I am free now(,) because I (will move) am moving to another (city) town.(, end my family's city.) I'd like to work and want to do kind work??. I have (read) seen on a website that you are looking (at samone good to work in a fast-paced environment) for someone willing and able to work fast under great stress, and I am good at that.

(Yours faithfully) Regards


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