Håber at der er nogle der vil rette mint teks og gøre sproget finere...

Hej...
Engelsk er ikke min stærke side så jeg vil hører om der er nogle der goder at se denne lille bis tekst igennem.
Og finde synonymer for nogle ord og skrive teksten på en anden måde men det skal stadig give den samme mening...
Spørg ikkek hvorfor alting har gode grunde....
Jeg håber i vil gøre det her komemr teksten:

The two little princes

Edward the 5. became king of England when he was 12 years old. His brother was 10 years old. They had an uncle called Richard. He was a very bad man; he wanted to be king himself.
So he paid another man to kill the both princes. The murderer came into their room in the Bloody Tower and held the bedcovers over the boys’ faces. And then they died.

One night a soldier was walking past the bloody tower. At the bottom of the staircase he saw 2 children; they were wearing long white nightclothes. The older boy was holding the little ones hand. When he saw the figures disappeared, he knew ha had seen the ghosts of the little princes.

About 200 years later after the murder, some men were working on the Bloody Tower they dug into the ground at the bottom of the staircase the found the bones of 2 little small bodies.

På forhånd Tak

Malfoy