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Rettelse af kort engelsk tekst +...
Engelsk er ikke min stærke side så jeg vil hører om der er nogle der gider at se denne lille bid tekst igennem.
Og finde synonymer for nogle ord og skrive teksten på en anden måde men det skal stadig give den samme mening...
Spørg ikke hvorfor alting har gode grunde....
Jeg håber i vil gøre det her komemr teksten:
Just Married
Stephen Duffy is interested in Motorcycles and so is a girl named Mary-Joy. They met each other in a parking area, and then they had a long talk about her motorcycle. And it ended up with a race between Stephen and Mary – Joy.
At first Mary – Joy took the lead. But Stephen won the race. Stephen had strange feelings inside, better than a riding motorcycle. Later they drove off together on Stephens’s motorcycle; afterwards they went on to Stephens’s house.
And next day was Mary – Joy going in a road competition. Mary –Joy won the championship. After the race Stephen ran down to congratulate her. He also uses the opportunity to propose her. And she said yes.
6 months later they got married at the city hall.
ps. Når jeg mener finere mener jeg det fordi så at det kan komme til at ligen så meget det engelske sprog som muligt.....
Håber der er nogle der goder at hjælpe...
Malfoy
Svar #1
23. maj 2005 af natgizzer (Slettet)
Just Married
Just like Stephen Duffy, Mary-Joy is infatuated by motorcycles. They had encountered one another in a parking area, where they immediately began discussing her motorcycle, the result of which was a race between the two.
Although Mary-Joy seemed to have gotten a solid lead in the beginning , Stephen won the race.
Afterwards, Stephen was left with strange feelings inside - even better than riding a motorcycle. He invited Mary-Joy to his place, and together they drove off on Stephen's motorcycle.
The very next day, Mary-Joy was going to compete in an elaborate road race.
And when she won first prize, Stephen ran down to her to not only congratulate her, but also to propose. She did not decline, and six months later, they got married at the city hall.
....håber at det hjalp lidt. Det var lidt svært at "gøre finere" idet jeg jo ikke kender historien i detaljer og derfor ikke kunne komme med tilføjelser.
Svar #2
23. maj 2005 af Malfoy (Slettet)
jeg behøver ikke andre forslag da dette er perfekt og deter lavet så fint som det overhovedet kunne laves...
Malfoy
Svar #4
23. maj 2005 af Malfoy (Slettet)
Du må da også kigge på andre af mine engelske indlæg....
Hvis du har tid, det vil være sødt af dig...
malfoy
Svar #5
23. maj 2005 af danielruhmann (Slettet)
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