rettelse- help please :-)

This is an article which is written by ….. . (in) from south London. The article is about (3) three single parents, Penny Turner, Teresa Goodman and Stephanie Gear. Penny Turner has a nine year(s) old son, Jordan.
They all belong to one of the most negatively stereotyped minorities, namely that of (one parent) one-parent  families. Penny Turnner has been trough a lot of problems and she thinks to educate Jordan has been much easy even Jordan's father has never been there for him????? . Office administrator Teresa Goodman lives with her five year(s) old son Nathan. Her (opinion) plan for the future  is to give the children  (what children ????)    the best opportunities in life  (as you) one can,  - give them (more) as much attention and spend (more) as much time with them as possible. Stephanie Gear is 28 years old and (is) the mother (for)of  three year(s) old Rebecca. Her boyfriend left her when Rebecca was still in her mothers stomach. After a while she met another (guy) man who took Rebecca on his own????? , but he too left (too) Stephanie.

tak, men den måde du har rette det på er lidt forvirrende:S

Det er ikke spor forvirrende. Det der er sat i parentes, skal naturligvis slettes, og det der er med fede typer udenfor, skal bruges i stedet.

Det der er understreget og med kursiv, er uforståeligt.

okay tak:)