engelsk rettelse

Hej alle sammen .. Er der nogen der vil rette min engelsk job ansøgning..

My name is noor. I´m 20 year’s  old girl.

I live with my lovely family. I have one sister and one brother. I´m born in Los Angeles 10  years old.  I was finished with my school in los Angeles.
I have seen your dream works about costume designer in my local newspaper.

I think this job is best to me, because I can like job about costume designer or house designer.
I can also like draw costume for girls. Because I think I draw very well.
And I am also are interested in the job, because I like work as costume designer or house designer.
 

I have drawed many walk  in my school.
I will be very glad of you, if I hear from you….