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engelsk rettelse til imorgen

02. oktober 2011 af brugforhjæp (Slettet)

Jeg gerne have at nogen skal rette min still

 

Taak forhånd''

 

For me friendship is, when two or more bodies become one soul. Those people, who not have a friend before, will not be able to imagine, how amazing it is that to be connected with someone else in that way. A friend is one you can tell secrets to, because you trust him or her. That thing I finding in my friends is not that I mostly can find at another persons, therefore has my friends a very special place in my heart. My friends are very different and mean a lot to me, I cannot replace them with others peoples… When I'm with my friends, so we are planning activities, such as going to the cinema, bowling, shopping or anything else. So friendship is on a way also to be socially.

 


Many people in our time have tended to feel lonely. I think it's because they have less friends in the twenty century than long ago, because if you have friends it's hard to feel lonely. We are just need to see our friends, talking and spend time then, the feeling that you are alone would disappear like the waves on the sea get lost.

 


I do not look after the gender nor age when I choosing friends, and I even have a friend, who is 13 years older than me and I have also many friends of the opposite gender. In friendship the ones personality is not playing a big role, for me unless they aren’t egoist and greedy. But otherwise, the people I have had a friendly relationships always been much or smaller different than me. I think that's the difference I find, that I most like about my friends. It is also very cool to get along with someone even though each has his own opinions, but the point of it is just being able to respect each other and try to understand them.

 


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02. oktober 2011 af jordbærtærten (Slettet)

Hej...

Jeg har rettet nogle af fejlene i det du har sat ind her.
Der er desværre end del løse ender i det endnu (og det kan stadig forbedres en del....)

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For me friendship is when two or more bodies become one soul. People who have not had a friend before will not be able to imagine how amazing it is to be connected with someone else in that way. A friend is one you can tell secrets to, because you trust him or her.

That thing I finding in my friends is not that I mostly can find at another persons, therefore has my friends a very special place in my heart. [sætningen giver ikke helt mening?]

My friends are very different and mean a lot to me, I cannot replace them with other people. When I'm with my friends we engage in different activities, such as going to the cinema, bowling, shopping or anything else. So friendship is also a way to be social.

Many people in our time tend to feel lonely. I think it's because they have less friends in the twentieth century than before, because if you have friends it's hard to feel lonely. We are just in need of seeing our friends, talking and spending time with them and then the feeling that you are alone would disappear like the waves on the sea.


I do not look after the gender nor age when I choose friends, and I even have a friend, who is 13 years older than me and I have also many friends of the opposite gender. In friendship the personality pf a person is not playing a big role, for me unless they aren’t egoist and greedy.

But otherwise, the people I have had a friendly relationships always been much or smaller different than me. I think that's the difference I find, that I most like about my friends. [sætningen giver ikke helt mening?]

It is also very cool to get along with someone even though he has his own opinions, but the point of it is just being able to respect each other and try to understand them.


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