Rettelse af engelsk

Hej! Jeg har det med at rode rundt i tiderne på engelsk! Du er velkommen til at tage et lille kig på et udsnit fra min stil! På forhånd mange tak! 

Dear diary
Tuesday 27th September
Dear diary today was day full of suspense and stress. First my father and I, started out with taking the car to the airport in Billund. A drive full of expectant conversations, about our coming trip to London. After checking in and a short visited around the small shops, we finally were on the plane at 07.30 pm. We were both extremely tired and quickly fell asleep during our flight. It was the touchdown, which actually went smoothly that woke us both. At around 10.30 pm we arrived in the stunning London. Quickly we found a cab, which drove us to our hotel. We had booked two rooms at the Park Lane Mews Hotel, a hotel in the middle of the street called Park Lane, which is in the central London. After we had leaved our luggage, we went for a walk strolling down Oxford Street. Oxford Street is a major thoroughfare in the City of Westminster in the West End of London. It’s Europe's busiest shopping street, as well as its most dense, and currently has approximately 300 shops. After I dragged my father several times through the many shops at Oxford Street, he decided to go back to the hotel and sleep. It propped me fine going around and exploring on my own. Later we met up again and decided to find place, were we could get something for dinner. We found a nice French restaurant near Park Lane Street. And I swear to God, I never tasted something identical to that meal! After we ate, we went up at our rooms. All in all it was a good day, full of experiences and learning. The weather was also extremely warm and nice. Well enough for today I’m so tired and I’m going to bed now. Sweet dreams!