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Family travel
I saw my friends for the last time, for I’m not going to see the class anymore. After the holiday I´ll going to change school. Before I walked out from the door, I saw my teacher gave me a postcard;
Dear Rebecca.
You have been a very good classmate we all have so many mines with you, and we hopes you´re going to love your new school, friends, and had it good in the future.
Love from your classmates and teacher who will go to miss you
I was very grateful for they had written a postcard to me; it was a good start to the holiday.
It was a beautiful day especially for we have summer-holiday, the birds were singing, the sun was shining, and peoples were happy. I have waited for this day in many months. My family, and me had decided to, went to Miami in 3 weeks, I think it will be a very good trip.
Just as I came home, we packed our suitcases and drove in direction to the airport. My brother has not interested for the holiday, but my parents say that he must to come. He is seventeen, almost eighteen, and 5 years older than me.
We arrived in the city after so many hours later. Here in Miami is it very beautiful and warm. We had booked a taxi to drive to the hotel, that we going to live. The hotel was a wonderful location; there was a beach, and the view from the rooms was beautiful, we could see across the city, and the sea.
There were already goes almost 2 weeks with shopping, sun, and the beach and I have still not get enough. Since i already knew the place, may to go out and shop in little boutique behind the hotel. I took all my pocket money since there was the most beautiful thing in the boutique.
I was on one´s way to the boutique, with a bag in the hand, with 500 pounds. Then there were happen something who i never had experience before; a man pushed me on the floor, toke my bag, and ran away with all my money. I was very depressed, and began to cry. We reported him rapidly to the police, but they could not find him.
The day was now coming to went back home, I had experience something sad, but besides that, I had the most perfect holiday with the family.