ENGELSK OVERSÆTTELSE - RETTELSE!

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Joan came running in the class room.
“Hurry up George,” she yelled” There has been a bank robbery. There is police with dogs and all possible and there came also an ambulance. ”Don’t worry,” Said George. How you know, that there has been a bank robbery?”
“There happening so much in this day” he continuing. “Maybe it is some recording movies.” Joan admitted that she didn’t know exactly what happened '' But there were least ten policemen'' did she eagerly. “If nothing happened, there wouldn’t be so much police”. George could see that she was right.
"If there is a bank robbery," he said. "becomes my grandfather sorry." he has all his money in the Bank and if something happens to them, I do not know what he is doing” The next day in the newspaper read the that there had in fact been committed a bank robbery, but since there was no one who had seen hearken to the car were the police without any trace.
The next day in the newspaper read the that there had in fact been committed bank robbery, but since there was no one there to hearken to the car, was the police without any trace. Fortunately had George Best's father moved his money to another bank the week before. Later said the old man that he had had the feeling that there could be something with his life savings, and he was consequently moved them, but George felt that his dad had put money into the new bank because he could get higher interest rates there.