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Kan I rette min stil? (tamins prøve)
My visit to…
Dear Mr. & Mrs. Calibri & Jonas.
Thanks a lot for the letter and thanks a lot for letting me live in your house. It is so nice finally to hear from you. I’m really excited about going to Oahu and visit you. I’m glad you write to me, so I can write back and tell you a little about myself and what I expect from the visit.
My name is Mathias, I’m 15 years old. I go the school in a small town called Mårslet. I live there with my mom, dad sister and my dog. My mom is 47 years old, my dad is 56 and my sister is 19 years old. In my spare time, I’m with my friends, at work or doing homework. My interest are cycling I watch “Tour de France” every summer, I don’t know if you watch it at Hawaii but if you want to watch it, we can watch it together. And if you’re interested in soccer, I’m a Barcelona fan. I’ve been at Barcelona once to watch a match. I can tell you about it when I come and visit you this summer.
I want to tell you about why I have chosen to visit Oahu.
I’ve always dreamed of coming to Hawaii, so when I heard there was an opportunity so visit Oahu, I jumped of joy! Since I was a little kid, I dreamed of coming to Hawaii, to see the palm trees and the crystal-clear water. Also I had a school-project about Oahu once, so I know a little about it. I know what Pearl Harbour is at Oahu and I really want to visit it! I think Hawaii is one of the most interesting countries in the world, I could choose between every English-speaking country in the world, and I have chosen Hawaii because, it is my dream.
There is something I want to experience under the visit. I want to know, how a family is, what they do, any different from a Danish family, Hawaii food, and Hawaii traditions. Also I’ve heard there is a Sea Life Park near Honolulu where you live. I would like to visit it, if possible. I also want to go skydiving if you also want to try it. Skydiving in the paradise, that’s something you got to try if you’re at Oahu! And of cause I want to visit Pearl harbour to learn a bit about World War II.
I’m really hoping that I can get much better in speaking English and writing it, as well as getting better to be on my own. (Without my parents) I’m really looking forward to my visit this summer.
Yours Sincerely
Mathias
Svar #1
24. november 2011 af AiWa (Slettet)
Du mener vel terminsprøve ikke?
My visit to…
Dear Mr. & Mrs. Calibri & Jonas. (det er deres efternavn du skal skrive)
Thanks a lot for the letter and thanks a lot for letting me live in your house. It is so nice finally to hear from you. I’m really excited about going to Oahu and visit you. I’m glad you are writeing to me, so now I can write back and tell you a little about myself and what I expect from the visit.
My name is Mathias, I’m 15 years old. I go the to school in a small town called Mårslet. I live there here (du bor her, ikke der, noget du burde kunne se forskel på sa man lærer det i 3. klasse) with my mom, dad sister and my dog. My mom is 47 years old, my dad is 56 and my sister is 19 years old (det er lidt latterligt at skrive hvor gamle alle er? bare skriv din søsters alder, det er vist nok). In my spare time, I’m hang out with my friends, wat work or doing homework I have a job so I go to work, then in my sparetime I hang out with my friends and of course I do my homework (her er der et eksempel på en velformuleret sætning, jeg kunne ligså godt gøre det med alle linjerne, men vil have du skal lære noget af det)
jeg vil faktisk ikke rette mere fordi synes ikke du har gjort nok ud af det. Jeg siger ikke at du skal kunne tale som om det var dit modersprog, du skal bare have lært det simple. Det du burde kunne. Hvis jeg skulle rette den her ville jeg give dig 4, eller 7 hvis jeg var i godt humør.
ved godt jeg er hård ved dig men du lærer det aldrig hvis jeg bare giver dig svarene :)
held og lykke! :D
Svar #2
24. november 2011 af sealion (Slettet)
Mener selvfølgelig terminsprøve.. Lagde den ind sent om aftenen, lavede lidt stavefejl :-)
Den er egentlig afleveret, lagde den her ind så jeg kunne få en idë om, hvad min karakter ville blive.
Og forresten, ja så glemte jeg og sige, at det er et brev :-) Så tror meget vel, at det meste er rigtigt, da mine engelsk karaktere er på 10 :-)
- Tak for svaret.
Svar #3
24. november 2011 af sealion (Slettet)
Og callibri er deres efternavn :D Jonas er deres søn :P
Svar #4
24. november 2011 af rakijovic
Hvordan man kan få "termin" til at udtales "tamin" overstiger min forstand...
► Vriendelikheid is net sinisme wat 'n jol gekry het! ◄ |||| ► Ljubaznost je samo cinizam što je dobio piće! ◄ ||||
► Prietenia este doar cinism care a băut puțin alcool ! ◄
Svar #5
24. november 2011 af AiWa (Slettet)
Aha, Callibri er deres efternavn! det er da også en skrift type ikke?
Nåh men det er godt at høre du har fået sådan en god karakter, det er super! :D
Tror også jeg har været lidt for hård, men sådan er det jo :P
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