Rettelse af Engelsk

Har lige noget her som skal tjekkes igennem for fejl.. Jeg har nemlig ikke stavekontrol på min pc.. Vil gerne have gjort det i dag. På forhånd tak! :D


The short story is about a amish girl named Polly Miller. From the beginning the family lived on a Amish farm in Ohio, in USA. But the family could’t make there living, so they moved to Texas to make money in order to pay off their farm in Ohio. In Texas the family lived in a house rented on a farm. The only friend Polly had was a girl named Rose Ann. After a couple of months in Texas, Polly’s parents and her younger sisters Sara and Effie goes back to visite the family in Ohio. Then Polly and her brothers Ben and Levi going to stay on the farm alone. On the farm theres working a man caled Tom. The only day Polly not is working is on sunday, insted she goes in the church with the family, but now when the family was in Ohio, she didn’t want to goe there. Rose wanted to see Polly in normal dress like any other “normal” girl. So the only chance to do that was on the sunday. When there stood there in the fine close, Tom came in. He said that she was very beutiful in the close. Tom like to see Polly in the dress another day. So they meet a the crossroad, there was Tom picking Polly up. He took her to a resturant caled “´The Bar-B-Que”. She diddn’t like the place because there was so many people staring at her. That sight she wasn’t use to. Because places like that, she might not go to, if she goes by the amish rules. She gets dropt of nicely at the crossroad.
Some months later Tom had a apontment with Polly, to meet her at the croosroad. This time he sounds stange and act strange. He took her in the car and drove down to the lake. He was drunk and out of crontrol to managent his felings. He aks’ her to mary him. She ran out of the car and in to the forrest, but Tom followd after her. Suddenly a snake bid Polly, and she get very scared. She yelled at Tom to help her. It was a very dangerous snake.