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Rettelse af fejl hjælp! haster!
I thourght a lot of you yesterday while i was walking down on Madison Avenue, and i desided to write a letter to you. Right now i am lieing in my bed at the cheepest hotel room inside NYC. The walls are almost falling off and i dont really have anything but a bed and a destroyed sink, this is not how i emagend it should be. But you know me, i always survive no matter how poor i am living. I know you havent got a letter from me in a while, and i apolegize for that. Is there something new happend in your life? And how is your family? I miss you guys a lot. As you know i went to New York to find my only one, and you are the one who said New York was the right place to go looking for love. So far i havent had any luck with me. I have been looking any where, i even went to a Meseum called Moma it is a mesuem for modern art. I thought i maybee could find a good, rich man in there. But as always im not the person with a lot of good luck with me. I had to go out with a crying face on, empty handeed back to my destroyed, poor hotel room. Also i went to a theatre with a show called The Phantom of the Opera. In fact i enjoyed the show. Tomorrow i am going to a helicoptor tour the tour is taking about 15 minutes and i am going to be face to face with the Statue of Liberty also i am going to see Empire State Building and Central Park while i am flying in the helicoptor this i a must that you have to experience if you ever go to New York again. Besides that i havent found my big love yet, i actually enjoy being here. I like the people here, they are very social and like talking to strangers compared to Denmark, people aren’t talking to people they dont know or havent seen before. New York is also so much bigger than my lillte hometown in Denmark, Randers. Sometimes i get all afraid of the buildings because they are so big. In Randers we dont have so many residents but in New York they have 19 million residents there is a big diffrence from Randers that only have 60.000 residents. I have considered moving down here. But first i need a rich man who can feed me. I emagine to get married by an white man with blue eyes and blond hair. But there is not many men who wanna marry a poor black woman like me. But i am still looking and i am not giving up. Now i wanna go out have some lunch, and go find my white furture housband.
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På forhånd mange mange tak !
Svar #1
11. december 2011 af thenyouretoastmate (Slettet)
Fin tekst. I starten har du kun få grammatiske fejl, men du falder lidt af på den i slutningen. Mange sætninger er lidt uforståelige/bøvlet formuleret. Ellers fin grammatik.
Her er nogle stavefejl, du kan rette:
thourght, emagend, apolegize, any where, Meseum, maybee
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